What is your opinion?
writting skills
"I really loved your story and had a great time reading it. When will the next chapter be available and what will happen in it. What inspired you to create this story and are you working on any other projects? Could you also recommend a story for me to read "
It Feels like a Rough Draft
"The plot line is well thought out, and there are shining lines of great writing in here. However, the dialog, feels incomplete, like framework to me. Personally, I would love to see more information about the protagonist's blogging. What does she influence? Makeup? The paranormal? Cooking? What about her friend? What's her story? Why are the BFFs? I DEFINITELY think you're on the right track with this, but to become truly invested in your story, I need to "be" the main character; I need to feel what she feels through description of her thoughts and physical reactions, ESPECIALLY in the dialog. But the opener of the cemetery scene was spot on!!!"
