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My feeling

"Very good, I really like it. It's quite similar to my story style, I hope to cooperate with the author. "

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Compelling plot

" After a long break from reading, I picked up this book because I wanted something refreshing for my mind and it did not disappoint. From the very beginning, it hooked me. It’s exactly what I was looking for. I love the mysterious plot and the suspense the author skillfully builds throughout the story. I’m especially intrigued by the secrets the character Sushi seems to be hiding. It keeps me guessing and fully engaged. I’m absolutely loving it and would highly recommend it to all fans of mystery and suspense. Well done to the author, please keep up the amazing work! I’m following your work closely and eagerly waiting for more updates. "

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Interesting

"This story provides an interesting premise as the author continues to build suspense with subtle details. The idea of the pajamas and the broken phone are subtle but important details that keeps the mystery going. Readers who like Mystery should definitely read this💯"

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Interesting

"i like the plot and the story... it sounds original. the dialogues are strong, and really gives a sense of being part of the story. i would have liked more world building, but the author has his own unique style of story telling, which does not cast negatively on his skills. but overall, i enjoyed it."

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