Prisoners Of Our Own Devise. by Aditya at Inkitt
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Prisoners of our own devise.

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Summary

We reap what we sow.

Genre
Other
Author
Aditya
Status
Complete
Chapters
1
Rating
n/a
Age Rating
13+

Count the seeds of mangoes.

Once upon a time their was a world. Where people used to live and all kind of species used to live happily. There was light ( no source of light, like darkness). Fire was cold for some and hot for some who wanted it to be hot. People could fly people could breath inside water. All these people were too powerful. Some times they used to quarrel too thats when things did not seem to be right.


However on this world their existed a magician called Rizwanand  who couls see the whole world but "no one could see him". He loved watching all the people living happily. He did not like them quarreling. He wanted to stop them all from quarrel.  As he knew story of both sides. He knew all these people were too powerful, they would not listen to him.  He came up with a plan he devised a magic spell. He casted that spell so that all the people were world locked in this world. Slowly he gave them fake sun fake moon to make them feel happy. He  watched them all live happily.



Magician had influenced the nature's law. People of the world power ceased to increase this was same with Rizwanand ( he had played with Law of justice). However Rizwananad never realize it.


Years passed by. One fine day a  man called Bretaditya  was roaming in jungle. He had a peculiar habbit of roaming in jungle without caring of worldly pleasures.  Due to laws of justice Bretaditya came to know about existence of Rizwanand and how he has created fake world.


It made Bretaditya all to angry. Bretaditya did not know the whole picture what had happened  in the past. What was the whole truth of nature.   Driven by anger he thought of teaching lesson to Rizwanand. He devised a new spell(lock) using which he made a new larger world (cage) where was Rizwanand and his friends  were also caged.


With the passing time Bretaditya forgot that spell which is used to open the cage.  One fine day Rizwanand thought world had improved to that extent when he could use his spell  to open the cage.

He used it to. But nothing happened. He kept on trying but nothing happened. After some time he realized about existence of Bretaditya. He felt sad. He summoned him and asked him to open the cage. Bretaditya tried but he had forgotten the spell.


This made Rizwanand sad. He could nothing. He was the one who started it all. He played with laws of nature. Now he was cagged  in his own device.



Both of them repented. They could not share their secret with anyone. They were sorry but they could not tell it to anyone , as ignorant who did not have any idea  if their world is real or fake will not help the cause.


So with mutual agreement they decided they should not play with nature and let it heal itself.




Years passed by. They were right everything returned back to normal once it was not played with.




Both of them realised  one lesson that they should be patient before jumping to any conclusion.

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