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An amazing Screen play- Descent into Madness💜
"Well what a ride and what a journey. This screen play took me on a journey I will never forget! I can not help but think is there another part to the story but I mean that id just me who wants more really. I loved the lay out for this screen play and I can really visualise this as I read on more and more 💜 Worth the read all and expect to blown away with this screen play. I do not like to kiss and tell but I am looking forward to reading more of this authors work thank you for such and intense and emotional and a journey I will not forget 💜 "
Decent Into Madness
"Another amazing work of yours. The emotions in this story were stronger than the other ones and they helped give an insight into one of the most important characters in this series. I hated everyone except for ABDO 2.0 and Reem but it was worth the read. Can't wait to read more, happy writing!"
Green Exchange Awards ‘25
"I am LOVING this screenplay! ABDO2.0’s Descent into Madness is an excellent screenplay. I was hooked from the first page. I would LOVE to see this acted out! This was a huge joy to read and I cannot wait to see what this author does in their future! Well done, author! Very well done! I am hopeful that with some corrections to the nitty gritty details, this will be an incredible page turner! Keep it up!"
A ‘Descent into Madness’ Well Worth the Read
"Abdo_2025 has done it again in this prequel action anime villain backstory! If you haven’t already read his other Anjal Universe books, no worries, this screenplay works as a stand-alone as well. But be warned… After you finish this story, there’s no way you’re not going to want to read the rest of the books afterwards! And rumor has it, he’s writing more! :D In all seriousness, this action-packed sci-fi drama is a beautifully written story about the complexities of human nature and humankind, individually and as a society. Without giving all the mystery away, we are taken down memory lane as robot-human, ABDO 2.0, reveals how the trials and tribulations of life culminated in him becoming the villain he is. It is a roller-coaster of a ride in storyline, action, and emotions. So buckle up! There are some minor technical writing errors, but nothing that hindered the story’s readability, and nothing a fresh edit won’t seek and destroy. Otherwise, the characters are relatable enough to make you want to care and Abdo_2025’s writing style flows exceptionally well. I highly recommend! *This review is in accordance with the judging criteria for the Green Exchange Awards 2025."
An Elevator Ride Straight to Hell!
"Abdo has lived a life full of unusual tragedy in his young years. At age five he and his brother Omar witnessed the brutal murder of their parents. He is then forced to attend a school where he is constantly bullied from his classmates. This creates a condition in Abdo where he is haunted by nightmarish hallucinations, visions full of monsters and blood soaked demons who are eager to devour him. Abdo’s sense of reality is destroyed forever. The only thing he can perceive behind his wall of madness, is his deep love for his brother and the love he has for his new found girlfriend Reem. But neither of them can protect him from the evil manipulations of Hisham. Hisham is a wealthy but otherwise ordinary student who quickly becomes jealous of Abdo’s kind-hearted nature and ability to make friends. He blackmails Omar into betraying Abdo, his only brother and he murders Abdo’s girlfriend by throwing her into a tree. Ultimately, Abdo is abandoned into a friendless, homeless state. But that is before he discovers The Core, an energy source that has the ability to transform an ordinary human being into a diabolical, missile-loaded, nuclear powered machine. All The Core requires in payment, is the small amount of humanity that Abdo has left. This is a wonderful in-depth characterization of the nature of evil, depicted skillfully by author Abdo 2025 (who also happens to share the name of his protagonist. Hope, that’s only a coincidence. Heh-heh.) The author greatly humanizes the soon-to-be villain by showing us Abdo’s initial vulnerability in the world. It’s hard not to feel sympathetic towards poor Abdo, as he suffers tragedy after tragedy in his life, at least in the beginning. I recommend this novel to anyone who wants to pull back the curtain and explore what is behind on the grinning confidence of villains"
Review of "Descent Into Madness"
" "Descent Into Madness" is a psychologically intense and emotionally charged narrative that centres on themes of betrayal, loss, and the transformation of an individual through suffering and revenge. The novel balances profound emotional depth with thrilling action, offering readers a gripping story filled with complex characters and morally ambiguous decisions. Thematic Depth: The novel excels in exploring profound themes such as the psychological toll of loss, the struggle with inner darkness, and the lasting scars of betrayal. These universal ideas make the story relatable yet deeply thought-provoking. Characterisation: The protagonist, Abdo, is a complex and multi-dimensional character. His transformation into ABDO 2.0 is a powerful depiction of trauma and revenge, making readers feel both empathy and fear. The supporting characters, while not as deeply developed, serve as important symbols of connection, redemption, and guilt within the story. Writing Style and Mood: The author’s writing is evocative, successfully setting an intense, often dark atmosphere fitting for the protagonist’s descent. The pacing is well-handled, balancing moments of high tension with introspective passages that give the characters and themes time to breathe. Emotional Impact: The narrative effectively draws readers into the psychological struggles of its protagonist, creating an emotional connection with his pain and journey. The story subtly prompts readers to question the consequences of society's failures on individuals. Secondary Character Depth: While the protagonist is masterfully crafted, some secondary characters lack sufficient depth and development, diminishing the emotional impact of their roles within the story. The author demonstrates great potential in crafting emotionally resonant and thematically rich stories. Their skilful exploration of psychological dynamics sets them apart, showing a strong understanding of human nature and emotional depth. "Descent Into Madness" is a dark yet captivating tale that explores the fragility of the human condition and the devastating effects of pain and betrayal. the author’s ability to weave psychological complexity into a suspenseful narrative is remarkable. This work highlights the author's promise as a writer capable of delivering thought-provoking and powerful stories. "
It's A five Star 🌟 🤩 ✨️
"Abdo was recounting his past to heavy metal, starting with the tragic final moments he shared with his parents, who were brutally killed by thugs breaking into their apartment. Their horrifying deaths left an unanswered question: why did the thugs want Abdo and his brother Omar so desperately? A kind woman took them in at her orphanage and sent them to school, but soon, Abdo began seeing terrifying stuff—blood dripping from walls, evil teachers, and monstrous classmates. None of it was real, but why was he experiencing this? Another haunting mystery to unravel. An intriguing short story—great work, author! Two thumbs up 👍👍 Highly recommended! "
Review
"You have done an absolutely amazing job. Reading your novels, I have seen much improvement in your writing style and it was quite visible in this book. I really enjoyed reading about the journey of Abdo to change into a villain. His emotions throughout are described well. His vulnerability, triggering points, weaknesses, strength, everything was on point. One thing you may add is a little more of a description but honestly, overall, it’s amazing. To conclude I can say that the plot was 5/5 Writing style 5/5 Grammar 5/5 Overall novel 5/5 I can’t wait for you to read more. Keep up the great work. "
GEA Review!
"I had a great time reading and judging this for the GEA! I seriously cannot give you enough props for writing and posting an entire screenplay - that is a monumental task and you should be so so proud of both your efforts and the fantastic story you've written! I thought the main duo, Abdo (aka Abdo 2.0) and Omar (aka Heavy Metal) were the strongest characters (though Hashim as an antagonist was great as well - loved to hate him!) and Abdo and his "descent into madness" was the heart of the story. I really felt for this kid - give him a break! I thought his arc was very strong and well done, which is no easy feat given his journey! I have a few pieces of feedback in the form regarding style and grammar/formatting, but overall this is very well put together and I can really see the passion you have for this work and writing in general. I really enjoyed my time in this world, and the open ending was the perfect lead into what I'm sure will be another action-packed story! I highly recommend checking this story out for an action-packed, tragic, heartwrenching story that I got lost in! Such fantastic work, keep writing! :) "
