What is your opinion?
short story collection
"A heart warming tale of the strength of family reminding us that we are never alone in our times of trial. Author has a wonderful skill for description, bringing the scene to life. a few grammatical errors, but nothing to distract from the story. The second story was a complete disappointment. the story goes back to the beginning and repeats before it concludes. This needs a new write up, but it is a compelling plot. Thank you for sharing."
Okay.... let's get down to business
"The first short story was amazing but it's the second one I need to talk about okay? First of all, it started off interesting and I was rather surprised on how you were going to finish it. Let's just say that I was confused... you seemed to have duplicated the story on the same chapter. Another thing, it really had no end and would have been better as an actual novel. It just seemed like- well I cannot describe. It had nothing that could be satisfying (or a cliffhanger). Thank you for having the time to read my feedback. "
