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I love this story.

"Great storyline. I'm praying it's complete since the last update was last year. "

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More chapters

"Great book but is it ever going to finish or give us another book that follows"

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Good storyline

"Awaiting what comes next. Good line, not alot of spice, which i am thankful for. Sometimes who is talking is a bit confusing, but still a great read! "

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Twists and turns in every chapter

"This book captures the heartbreak of an orphan, the courage to fight for what they believe in and the courage to rise above those that seek to keep them downtrodden. A fantastic read for anyone,good plot twist and flow, the correct about of switching between characters that doesn’t leave the reader confused but desperate to know more."

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Amazing!! Definitely need more from this writer.

"Love everything about this book. Even the fact that it was kept at a PG 13 level. This author has amazing talent and I cannot wait to read more of their work! "

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Best book on these platforms so far!!

"Probably the best book I’ve read on these online platforms ! It is well written and not so predictable ! A new plot and world ! Finally an OG"

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The abandoned alpha.

"The book is fast paced enthralling captivating. I can’t say enough good thing the full emotional range from joy to frustration to anger and everything in between. "

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Great story!!!

"This is a fantastically written story. I’m glad that I started reading it. "

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The abandoned Alpha

"Great dialog. I really enjoyed this. Is there a book 2"

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The abandoned alpha

"Good plot, very suspenseful and captivating. Lively and diverse. Romance and heartwarming relations next to violence and hate."

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Book

"Enjoying this"

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Hurry, hurry, hurry. I can't wait to read more

"I like this story line very much "

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The Alfa and the forsaken

"Brilliant loved the story "

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Omg

"Don't leave me hanging 😭😭😭😭😭😭"

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The abandoned alpha

"Really great story . Heartbreaking in some parts great characters "

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Chapter

"Love the story line no going if the plot like some story’s but please when is the next part"

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Hooked by the Story—Eager to See What’s Next!

"well, overall story is very nice, and engaging. the characters are well written, just some of them need more developments. i like how there are multiple POVs, and not just two protagonist's POV. about dark powers, it's scary enough to last impact, but it doesn't give nightmares, or trauma. so it's really balances the story. story is not completed, so some of the things are not closed. and few characters like josh, or his sisters are not properly introduced. but i guess it would come in later parts so i will be waiting for it. "

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Digital art commission

"Heyyyy!!!! I just finished reading your story, and honestly, it’s incredible. Your writing is so vivid and full of emotion — I really felt connected to the characters and the journey they went through. The way you build the world and keep the plot moving made it hard to put down. Since I’m an artist, I got some ideas for cover art that I think would match your story perfectly. I’d love to share them if you are interested!"

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Bear

"Love the story. Can’t wait to see how this story finishes ."

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Heartwarming and Emotional

"The book is set in different peoples point of view. The pain you feel for the main character and even some of the side characters for their grief is astounding. Definitely a page turner."

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