Customize readability
Aa

THE WEIGHT OF WINGS

All Rights Reserved ©

Summary

"THE WEIGHT OF WINGS" is a thought-provoking and imaginative exploration of the human experience. Through a rich tapestry of metaphors, symbolism, and wordplay, the poem delves into themes of identity, morality, freedom, and the complexities of life. The language is vivid and expressive, with a unique blend of abstract concepts and tangible imagery. The poem's structure and rhythm add to its emotional impact, creating a sense of urgency and introspection.

Status
Complete
Chapters
1
Rating
5.0 3 reviews
Age Rating
13+

THE WEIGHT OF WINGS


The weight of wings ravels,

Quicksand and time travels.


Enemies and rivals,

In a gambit of final.


The sacrifice of a pawn saves the king,

Only to be a checkmate by a queen's king.


Kings are common; only differ in color,

Or are the kings different, the same in color?


Portals are open, wanting someone to dive,

In the mockery of the silent heights.


Never mind, the amperes travel that way,

Negatives and positives all the way.


Neutral is the term for them combined,

Wanting to disperse the turbulence inside.


Pointed and nailed, pierced down;

Crispy and crunchy combo compound.


Encumbrance the heavy, onus the draining,

Fierce the charger, vexed the charging.


Tornado discharging terror discharged,

Dwelling is the term, but dwell on the start.


Ripples of water get surprised,

Only to find violence and tides.


Air, the pollutant; gale, the hazard.

Mass, the mess; trail, the wizard.


Freedom is easy; embracing is hard.

Gold glitters, glitters spark.


Wanting to fly, walking is hard.

The weight of wings withers hard.



Let delilahdoyle_aa know what you thought about this chapter!
Love this

4

Love this

Funny

0

Funny

Spicy

0

Spicy

Suspenseful

0

Suspenseful

Emotional

2

Emotional

Profound

1

Profound

Heartwarming

1

Heartwarming

Shocking

0

Shocking

Good Writing

3

Good Writing

Compelling Plot

0

Compelling Plot

Great Character

0

Great Character

Strong Dialog

0

Strong Dialog

Further Recommendations

Entretien avec un Démon

Nat: J'ai beaucoup aimé lire cette histoire... Une belle plume facile à lire drôle, émouvante et sensuelle... J'aimerais bien avoir une suite avec les autres personnages qui n'ont pas été trop impliqués dans l'histoire, ce serait sympa comme suite ♥️

Read Now
Becoming Mrs Moran

grytbit: I just love the back and forth between Magnus and Lola, so much fun!

Read Now
Inherited Complications

Linda Searle: This is not your typical I hate you I love you scenario. This is something almost real. Ellie as a character is refreshing and had me both laughing and crying often. I would recommend this to anyone looking for something different.

Read Now
Chica nueva, Jefe nuevo

MaríEn: Me gusta la temática y no me gusta que la dejen a medias

Read Now
Fumbled

Deonna: One more great read from an amazing author! Loved the struggle of making sure they were truly "home." Sydney and Carson deserved their happy ending! ❤️🩶

Read Now
Piece of Cake

YukkeTee: This isn’t just a romance. It’s the kind of slow-burn, messy kind of love that feels real—where two people carry scars and walls, and still choose each other anyway. The tension isn’t just between them; it’s in the quiet moments, the way they fumble through vulnerability, and the small, unspoken act...

Read Now
Trouble in Paradise?

Roshini: I like everything about this novel except for the sickness which is a heartbreak, I would definitely recommend to first time readers.

Read Now
Verbotene Nähe im Flur 3B

Susanne B. Baronin von Rothensteyn: Bleib einfach Deinem Stil treu, auch bei den intimen Szenen. Du machst das toll.So lange es am Ende ein Happyend gibt, ist für mich alles gut 🫣

Read Now
How to Catch like a Goalie?

karp2022: Viele Zweifel führen zu Bewegungen zwischen den Protagonisten. Mal so, mal anders, immer was los - und das mit Tiefgang.

Read Now