What is your opinion?
Great start
"This was such a good first chapter to this book. The characters are described very vividly along with the setting. There is also a good amount of background information. I also loved the fun nature given to the characters. There were a couple of things that threw me off in the story such as =Weds B and Re-Pete. Maybe I am wrong and it is very simple but I would have liked some clarity on that. Overall it is a very good first chapter and I do want to come back to read more."
Flow
"For me, reading is a wonderful experience about a story. This is a great story, and I look forward in anticipation to read Part II."
Editing
"It would be really appreciated if these books were edited for spelling, punctuation and grammar. I find I lose interest in any book that seems like it's written by a 6th grade level author. The theme is ok but the writing itself needs help."
