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A Fantastic Read from Start to Finish

"I thoroughly enjoyed reading this story. It was exceptionally well written, kudos to the author! The characters were engaging and memorable, and the plot developed at a great pace. The final few chapters, in particular, had me completely hooked; I simply couldn't put it down. Leo and Bradley were my favourite characters. They reminded me so much of a few classmates from my student days, which made them feel even more authentic and relatable. Overall, this was a wonderful read, and I highly recommend it. ** I read all 50 chapters, I don't know why it is saying 48."

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A Powerful book with a powerful message: 💜

"After taking my time because this story really spoke to me and a powerful story this was. I feel this needs attention especially for the LGBTQ community, honestly from the start to the very end. This is a must read book, showing real emotions of sexuality and what people go through with this fiction story. Sharing a lot of people who do not understand sexuality the hidden layers people who are not straight go through, how tough it is, the bullying that happens when no one sees, the shame you feel but shouldn't but society makes it hard. Cryptic says it how it is, the education system failing students who are homosexual, understanding what this can really do and lead to shocking events that no one should go through but unfortunately dose happen out there is the real world. Educational professions need to read this book and take note. There is a lot of emotions for me with this book because I do get the harder-ship of it, I really do as I am not gay but a pansexual woman I do relate in ways. I will not give anything away with the characters plus I never like to kiss and tell as I say but share wisdom from the boom and a slice of insight. This book I would absolutely like to see on book shelves to help younger adults understand what they are going through, showing they are not alone but there are people that can really help even if it is reading a book like this because the message is strong. Very powerful message for the younger generation for schools, colleges and even Universities. Elements you feel are both emotional at times and the humorous moments as well fantastic structure and character depth here. The storyline you know my thoughts as I have been reading and commenting. Thank you for this amazing story, looking forward to reading more of your work. 💜 "

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Character-driven and emotionally honest

"What stood out to me was the emotional honesty of the story. The author handles sensitive themes like bullying, identity, and connection with restraint, allowing the characters to grow naturally over time. The pacing is steady, the relationships feel believable, and the emotional moments are earned rather than forced. I would recommend this to readers who enjoy thoughtful, character-focused coming-of-age drama with depth and heart."

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This Story Wins!

"Alexander has a double room at his exclusive boarding school in England all to himself, until a new boy, Clifton, is allocated the extra space. Of course, Alexander welcomes him with ... a separation barrier and a cold shoulder. This captivating story is one of the exploration of sexuality, the impact of bullying, a blossoming friendship, and so much more, all tied together with a strong moral thread. This is the kind of book that I would like to see on bookshelves in schools because it has many powerful, educational slants to it. This, combined with a great storyline, containing a good mixture of emotional elements and humorous moments, makes it a rare find. If you like BL stories, I'd highly recommend reading this book. "

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WHO Cares WHO Wins❤️❤️

"Another amazing and brilliant Story/Book by @MossfordGreen. Who Cares Who Wins is well written, and a very enjoyable reading experience. The boarding school setting is very relatable and believable. The main characters Alexander and Clifton are very lovable characters, their story is emotional, and heartbreaking. Alexander and Clifton are strong, courageous young men, they have made a stand against the school bullies that think it’s okay to torment, and bully them as well as other students at the boarding school, but things are about to change thanks to Alexander and Clifton. This story is interesting and intense from the beginning to the end, I highly recommend this fantastic story to everyone on Inkitt.❤️❤️"

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One spark and then it takes off...

"The start of this story is like when you light fireworks. It flashed and sparked and then the story takes off. The start of this book is the simple meeting of the two main characters and then it becomes a whirlwind. I felt the twists and turns of this book very acutely. If you are a reader that is a fan of plot twists and turns, this is a good read for that. It is not overly sexual and in that area, it almost has a softer feel. The music suggestions in the story are a lot of fun. I found myself on Youtube looking up the song suggestions. Also, if you want to learn about Rugby, this book does it. Highly suggest this if you want something a little different! "

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