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Fight back sylvia!!!!

"Sylvia should fight back with courage.that will build chemistry too. update soon"

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Pay back anytime now

"I wish she would really give him a taste of his medicine an show him that he means nothing to her. She allows him to have to much power over her an I wish she would just put him in his place an treat him as he treats her. He acted like a good man to get her to marry him an once that happened he turned evil. So after all he's done an put her thru, I feel it's time for the tables to turn bc it's bs what she as a queen is being treated like by her own husband"

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"I liked a lot, except this king, he is so mean I can't breathe 😭😭I would recommend this book to people who are 14 and above. I chose this rating because it was misty suitable for me "

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Good Plot

"I like the plot of the story, but there is no connection between the king and queen. He acts way too indifferent towards her. Maybe he should show more interest in her sooner but keep going back to Celia."

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It was very nice reading .Lost track of the time reading

"Loved reading this story"

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