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What is your opinion?

about your writing

"I really enjoyed reading your work. You’re definitely one of my favorite writers now! How long did it take you to develop this whole plot? And when is your next project coming out? I’d honestly be really happy to read that milestone too. By the way how many years have you been writing?"

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The Laws Of Ascension

"The story is interesting the descriptions are fantastic I can't wait to find out what is going to happen and is this going to be a trilogy or a series of novels?"

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Chapters

"Need more chapters please."

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Please continue this story

"I would truly love to read more of this story, the plot and characters are excellent, and I absolutely love Nyxfang."

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Perfect

"Ok so this will going to be a long review 1. I love the story . At the starting its bit of much because its too detailed. But i guess that the magic of this novel. But with more chapters i kind of love it .the detailed part. And most of all though its a long novel. I am hooked . And looking forward for every update. 2. I usually don't like male pov in whole novel. But i kind of love loric. 3. When i was reading this novel i was thinking that i am getting some kind of resemblance with manga or anime i have watched most recently of isekai and even the most recent i have watched anime that is 'campfire cooking in another world with useless ability ' because the resemblance with fenir (nyxfang) monster is somewhat similar. And the similarity of LAW and MANA is what makes me think the novel is inspired by it. Lol i am even hoping for slime monster when you started adding goblins and higher monsters. But like in the end I'll say.. this is really good novel and very thorough. I am hoping for it to be a long Long novel so that it is like watching anime."

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Great story

"Great characters still I love the interaction Loric is a great hero"

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A fun read!

"I don’t know why, but stories about people with powers in schools are in my top 3 favourite types of books. This story has had me hooked from the very beginning. I wasn’t exactly sure what I was getting into at first but it really has fleshed out the character development and interaction between the main characters. Loric is an amazing character and I can’t wait until it happens with Veyra. (Hoping for a romance!!) I could go on... instead - people should just read the story. ;)"

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