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"You have done an absolutely amazing job. I am absolutely hooked up and can’t wait to see where the story proceeds. The writing style is 5/5 in my opinion. The emotions are explained well. I love Tara’s character and how she is just too calm and patient. Her personality teaches many lessons. The grammar according to me is 5/5. Keep up the great work. Your book has loads of potential. "

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Good Story

"Hi .. keep up the good work and I'm sure in no time there'll be a lot of people reading and leaving good reviews on your book.. hope yo see more of your work ,☺️❤️"

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Love the story

"This excerpt offers a beautifully layered story of grief, healing, and personal connections. The emotional tension between Vikram’s past and present is carefully crafted, and the familial bonds are heartwarming. The inclusion of vibrant characters like Nisha and the evolving dynamics between Tara and Vikram’s family makes this a good read. What I like- Strong character development, particularly Vikram's emotional arc. The introduction of Nisha adds humor and energy to the narrative. Suggestions- The pacing between the quieter moments and more energetic scenes could be further refined to build tension. But overall it is a good read. Thank you for sharing, keep up the good work. "

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