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Storm

"Really good story line . Hopefully the sequel will be coming soon "

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Fantastic Read!

"Eagerly awaiting it's continuation!"

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I’m hooked

"This is a thrilling plot that I’m thoroughly enjoying. Some descriptive passages go a little too long for my liking. I’m enjoying the maturation of the characters. Their evolution is believable and intriguing I can’t wait to continue reading. "

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Storm

"Love the story, love the characters from the villain to the heroes.. can't wait to read the second novel"

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Storm

"It's a very compelling story. Keeps you coming back and wanting more. Constantly wondering what the next chapter holds, and you haven't finished the one your on yet. Loved it."

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Rose and Alec

"So far it’s been an amazing read! I can’t wait to see if they are safe from the king! Thank you for sharing "

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Loved the beauty of this story!

"Loved meeting these characters and can’t wait to read the next story! Loved the world development. Not overly verbose but could easily see the world the author had created. Characters were very interesting and multilayered. Very much enjoyed getting to know them and their subtleties. Also, some very nice spicy bits that were fun to read. "

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Storm

"Exceptionally well written book. Every chapter drags you into intriguing depths of the character’s personality’s and their adventures. Looking forward to the king 👑 getting his just desserts."

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Loved it!

"This was a fantastic book that had me pulled in from the first chapter. The plot starts immediately, and we mainly follow Rose as she is forced into a marriage that is supposedly meant to end a seven-year-long war. At times, she can seem rather bratty or immature (But I mean, come on, who wouldn't be in an arranged marriage with the enemy) The enemies-to-lovers / slow-burn romance is done extremely well. Prince Alric is cold toward Rose, sometimes even indifferent. However, as we learn more about him and his family dynamic over time, you can't help but feel for him. Even Rose can't stop herself from wanting to help him. This is when we start to see the most character growth from her. And it was more than just her jumping into bed with Alric (like you might see with this type of trope), we get to watch her grow stronger, learn to trust, and accept the fact that there was more to the world than just her home. This whole story was beautifully done, and I cannot wait for the second book! "

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Storm

"I really enjoyed reading your book. It was very interesting and kept me wanting more. I can't wait to read more. "

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Read it in a day

"I definitely recommend picking up this story. The characters are dynamic and the plot pulled me along right to the end. And don't be like me, panicking about how everything is going to wrap up in only the last few chapters! I liked how the relationship progressed and how Rose figured out how not to be a spoiled brat (iykyk!) I'm looking forward to the sequel."

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Storm

"Great story, well written, can't wait for the 2nd book, happy writing "

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Really enjoyed it

"I like both Rose and Alric’s characters, they took time to go through differences and learn each other. I’m happy they did. I can’t stop thinking about them as alive people and it says something :) Can’t wait for book 2, thank you, Author. "

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Storm

"What an adventure. Great characters and story development. I’m on the edge of my seat anticipating book 2."

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New chapters

"When can we expect new chapters for book 2 and how many do you plan to release at a time? I might have to come back to this story once it’s further along. I have a hard time waiting and like to read a lot at once. "

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Great plot

"The plot to this story is good and the writer has a good grip on the story keeping you wanting moe"

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Very exciting and well written!

"I couldn't stop reading! The way the surroundings and the charakters are described is beautiful and not too much lost in endless descriptions but has a touch to the heart though. I can't wait to read more! Already saved in my favourites-reading-list!🥰"

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WOW

"When I first started reading the book I didn't think I was going to like it. It was difficult for me to really get into. However, as I kept reading, I just couldn't put it down. I feel like I really know the characters. As I'm reading, I think of what I would like to do to destroy that evil king. I can't wait to find out how this will end, but at the same time, I don't want it to end."

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Can't get enough!

"This story is absolutely amazing! It perfectly captures the enemies-to-lovers dynamic while immersing readers in rich fantasy details. The slow-burn romance keeps emotions running high, making it impossible to put down. The characters are deeply engaging—frustrating at times, yet irresistibly compelling. The diction is fantastic, filled with vivid imagery that brings every scene to life. With frequent updates and consistently captivating content, each chapter surpasses the last, keeping readers hooked from start to finish. Can't wait to see what happens next."

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Nice read

"So good can’t hardly wait for more updates "

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