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Encerrados Entre Mentiras y Deseos BORRADOR

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Summary

Laia despierta en una ciudad y pocas cosas recuerda de ella. La encuentra un joven con dos vidas, la de actor famoso y simpático y la de fornicador . Él la acoge . Ella va recordando cosas ... ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ ESTO ES SOLO UN BORRADOR

Status
2yrs ago
Chapters
27
Rating
n/a
Age Rating
16+

Chapter 1 LIA

Me levanto de un banco más incómodo que las sillas de la sala de espera del médico. No sé qué hago aquí. No sé qué día es. No sé quién soy. Bueno, no tan dramático, pero casi. Rebusco en los bolsillos y, ¡oh, sorpresa!, mi móvil está ahí. Le pongo la contraseña... Error. Lo intento otra vez. Error. Me empieza a sudar la frente. ¡Bendita huella dactilar! Por suerte, mi yo del pasado pensó que recordar números sería mucho pedir.


Abro la cámara y, cuando veo mi reflejo, casi tiro el móvil al suelo. Tengo cara de zombie que lleva cinco capítulos sin morir. Pelo revuelto, ojeras de panda, ropa que ha visto días mejores. Pero bueno, al menos recuerdo que tengo 18 años, algo es algo.


Echo un vistazo alrededor. Lo que sí es seguro es que esto no es mi barrio, ni mi país, ni mi vida... porque, en efecto, esto parece un mercadillo marroquí con más gente que una tienda de rebajas. Me levanto, estiro un poco las piernas y camino sin rumbo fijo. Bueno, más bien deambulo como alma en pena, esquivando gente que me mira raro.


Y entonces lo veo. A lo lejos, entre el caos, hay un tipo que llama mi atención. Alto, guapo, con pinta de no perderse nunca.


—"Interesante..." —pienso. Y cuando yo digo "interesante", es porque el universo está a punto de meterme en problemas.

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