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Ask me for a wish?

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Summary

How a person was exploited for his special abilities.

Genre
Other
Author
Aditya
Status
Complete
Chapters
1
Rating
n/a
Age Rating
13+

You wish is my command.

Once upon a time their existed a boy who was very honest( best to his conscience). This made this boy invincible and this boy had special powers who could make anything possible. One day a magician came to know about this boy. He hatched an evil plan to make a whole world his slave. So he befriended this boy posing as girl. And asked this boy lots of wishes which were impossible for other beings. He even asked this boy to make one of his (magician) slave immortal. Boy happily obliged. This girl then asked one very evil wish from the boy will it possible for you to marry me after two births. Boy in his pride said yes. So inorder to prove his honesty boy died.


Birth occured but magician always gurded this boy so that noone would come to know powers of boy. Always kept him engaged him petty fights and foolish motives. He never told boy about his previous birth happenings. Boy gave up his life once again.



Finally 2nd birth happened. This too magician did  his level best to get boy killed . But this time justice had other plans. Boy did not choose to die. He choose to live.  Slowly boy came to know experience of his previous births and how the magician had slaved  the world.


So he hinted  it to the world. Magician who was considered as godess came down falling from sky heights to land. With the time she realised his mistake. Boy too realised how foolish he was in previous birth. People also realised their fault how people accepted lies as truth because they where free.

With the time world became a better place once gain.

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