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Amazing

"Im totally hooked, definitely a page turner. It’s a beautiful story well done. I can’t wait for more "

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Excellent World building and fascinating characters!

"I was thoroughly engrossed in the story and found that your prose is absolutely beautiful. The only thing I find lacking from this is simply some more connections being forged between individuals and perhaps some more development of secondary characters. Other than that it was fantastic! Excellent work! "

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