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I live for characters standing on business

"I was scared at the end for Max, but OMG, I'm so glad it went where it did because this story as really sad in the last half y'all. But I honestly think this story is important because of the themes of the abuse of power and the politics that are present and the fact that the main character was just a young sex worker trying to live their life that had been basically forced onto them and they were making good with what they had. I am sad that this affected their relationships the way it did, but I can't wait for more stories in this universe."

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My New Home

"Well, talk about a twist. This story was so different. My man Max had enough, took matters in his own hands, and ended Malcolm. Talk about dysfunctional that family top the list, but then money allows those type of people freedom to get away with anything. Would definitely like to read more about Draven, Max, and Jordan. Very good story. Thank you for sharing."

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Too slow

"Way too slow releasing chapters Ending was not focused on key characters Disappointed "

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My new home

"I like the plot of the story. The characters are very interesting and erotic. "

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Pretty good

"This is my first "gay" story, but so far, it's good. Some of the phrases are repeated too much, like the locking of eyes and shivers down the spine. There was an inconsistency with him sucking Draven off. He said he never did that, but he had done it at the bachelor party. Otherwise, it's interesting, and I'm curious on how the story goes from here. "

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My new home

"Interesting. Very sexual a little repetitive in areas. "

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