Back to Story

Average Ratings

  • Overall Rating
  • Plot
  • Writing Style
  • Grammar & Punctuation

What is your opinion?

Dominating my moms slave girl

"Beautiful story of a young mistress dominating an older woman, but I hope there is a follow-up story."

  • Overall Rating
  • Plot
  • Writing Style
  • Grammar & Punctuation
Well written

"Very good captivating short read. Kept you wanting to know where it was heading for "

  • Overall Rating
  • Plot
  • Writing Style
  • Grammar & Punctuation
A sensual journey through a closeted dommes' mind

" A refreshingly short but rich story about the awakening of a woman's inner demons. The main character, willing and even greedy, to usurp her mother's lover, rides a tide wave of unexplored desires, into reality. Domination guided, not enforced by physical strength, but by chance, lust, and mere presence. They way the main character steals her mother's lover is a slow burn, with both characters revealing their tension and determination at every given moment. A quick read, but definitely a worthy one. 9/10 for this young author. "

  • Overall Rating
  • Plot
  • Writing Style
  • Grammar & Punctuation