The Hole In His Head

Phoenix_Giardino

30 chapters read

Jan 25, 2025

I love the plot!

"A science nerd myself with an interest in reincarnation, this storyline is great! I love your use and explanations of the equipment used. In terms of writing style, I felt your verb choice in most cases was a bit passive--a lot of -ing words. Not that this is bad, -ing and "weak" action words take the power from the subject. They reduce the impact of the subject's behaviors. In my personal opinion, stronger verb choices will suck the readers so far into your story they'll never forget it. But good work!"

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luannozaeta

36 chapters read

Jan 14, 2025

The jury is still out

"I started reading this book due to curiosity I'm continuing to read this book due to curiosity. It's pretty interesting I have to give the author that it's very well written and the technical side of the story as far as the machinery and different things is very well put together. It's a whole different kind of story than what I'm used to reading so that's why I say the jury still out. So let me tell the author at this point in time that I will read the story to the end and let you know my feelings towards it thank you in advance for all your hard work."

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