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A Christmas Story

"A short story of grief, trauma, and the pathway to repentance written beautifully to showcase the pressures from religion and acquaintances. There is a moment where you’re begging Elsie to repent, you’re dying to know what torments her. But the truth is, none of us have a right to know. We do not need to know the burdens in someone’s heart to love them. Even more so when they’ve moved on and found a new purpose or love. We as humans are so quick to judge, especially on a holiday season like Christmas. Brilliant and beautiful storytelling. "

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