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Secrets Written in Darkness

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Summary

SECRETS WRITTEN IN DARKNESS A Novel In Mombasa, shadows can be stolen. So can souls. So can men. Detective Hami Amali knows which truths to bury. For twelve years, he has. Until he finds a corpse with no shadow and Sarabi Atiena in a deserted chapel, barefoot on coral stone, smelling of salt and sin. She’s a shadowbinder. Outlawed. Hunted. The kind of myth that gets cops killed. She offers him a choice—Keep his badge and stay blind, or see the truth that Agano la Siri—a secret society of judges and captains, is extracting people's shadows to buy immortality. They took his sister. They’ll take the city next. Hami chooses her. Files the lie. Damns himself in the eyes of the law. The first time Sarabi touches him, her mark sears into his skin. The second time, her mouth is at his throat and he forgets what duty ever meant. Now the system he served wants him dead. Plus, the Agano wants Sarabi, whom he met silenced. And the only thing standing between Hami and the grave is Sarabi, a woman made of darkness. She might be forbidden. She might be ruined. But in a city where love is a reckoning, not a salvation, Sarabi is the only one who can save him. Secrets Written in Darkness is a dark fantasy erotic thriller. Contains ritual murder, explicit sexual content, morally grey romance, and a detective who trades his badge for the shadowbinder who saves his soul.

Status
Ongoing
Chapters
27
Rating
n/a
Age Rating
18+

The Chapel Meeting: chapter 1

“How many more times until it’s too late?” he mumbled, the storm swallowing the world outside. The sky wept. Rain fell in torrents, blurring everything into a palette of grays and blacks.

Night had fallen, a darkness deeper than usual, pressing against his eyes and making him question his own vision.

The storm continued as lightning fractured the sky, momentarily etching the Mombasa skyline in stark contrasts of white and shadow, lending an alien sharpness to the scene.

Thunder rumbled in low, distant waves, while raindrops traced glittering paths down the eaves of the deserted Mwanga Chapel on Serena Road, like threads of molten silver.

Though, Hami Amali stood motionless at the entrance.

The cold bit through his coat, a chill so sharp it felt like ice in his veins. He paused, forcing down a tightness in his throat he dared not identify. Nights like these always peeled back his defenses, exposing the fragile man beneath. For a long moment, he was suspended between the raging elements and the profound silence within. Then, gathering his resolve, he stepped inside.

The air within was heavy with the scent of damp stone and extinguished candles, as if every flame had been snuffed out just before his arrival. Ritualistic carvings on the floor gleamed with fresh rainwater, pooling in the indentations like forgotten memories.

A figure materialized from the gloom. As it moved closer, it resolved into a woman. She was not the one he had come to find or investigate, but here she was.

“I’ve come for answers, not to be anyone’s savior,” he muttered.

His eyes narrowed, his gaze intense as he glared across the space. He could feel her energy, a low hum of composure that made him uneasy. She looked back, unblinking, leaning against the far wall while barely visible through the haze of shadow and lingering incense.

She didn’t flinch when he spotted her or when the beam of his light found the line of her cheek. She tilted her head slightly, as if deciding whether he was real or just another phantom in this forsaken place.

Her voice, when it came, was a whisper so soft he almost doubted he heard it.

“You’re late, mpelelezi,” she said, her Swahili accent gentle and melodic.

Hami felt his breath catch. She hadn’t startled him, but that seductive voice seemed to hide something dangerous, unsettling him. Something in her tone, the casual certainty of it, made the air feel tighter, as if the very building had shifted to listen.

His thoughts swirled with questions. Does she know me? Have we met before?

He couldn’t recall her face, but something about her eyes felt familiar. However he had never met her physically, perhaps he had seen her eyes on pictures related to investigations, but not more often. To add on, the way she spoke and moved suggested she held secrets he wanted to uncover. He had kept quiet at the scene, planning this to be a low-key investigation of the books. The last thing he needed was to ruin his cover this early.

He cleared his throat to buy time. He was much better at questioning suspects surrounded by uniforms in a dimly lit interrogation room. Here, with only the rain and shadows as witnesses, her focus felt too intense and too intimate. It stripped the procedure down, leaving only an unnerving exchange between them.

“You shouldn’t be here,” he finally said, his voice low and commanding. “This is an active crime scene.”

She stepped into the faint light, and the shadows slipped from her shoulders like obedient creatures. Her presence stirred something low and unfamiliar in his stomach, a subtle disquiet that felt suspiciously like fascination.

“I know,” she said. “But then— so here I am.”

The words hung between them, layered with a meaning he couldn’t quite grasp. Was she claiming to be part of the crime? A witness? Something else entirely?

Hami felt his fingers tighten around the flashlight, not in threat, but in uncertainty. Her eyes held the same silent plea he’d seen before in another wounded soul: “Understand me… even if you shouldn’t.”

And he already knew, far too soon, that he was in trouble.

He should call it in. Protocol demanded it; there was an unidentified person at the crime scene, a potential suspect. His radio was right there on his belt. One call and backup would arrive in minutes.

But he didn’t reach for it.

“Who are you?” he asked instead, taking a measured step forward. His boots echoed on the stone floor, water squelching beneath him.

“Does it matter?” She didn’t move and didn’t seem alarmed by his approach. Except for how she looked, tired. And there were shadows under her eyes that had nothing to do with the surrounding darkness.

“It matters if you were here when the murder happened.”

“I wasn’t.” Her gaze drifted past him to the ritual symbols on the floor. “But I know who it was.”

Hami’s pulse quickened. This was the fourth murder in three weeks. Four bodies, all found in abandoned places like this, all marked with signs of shadow binding—the forbidden magic that society had outlawed decades ago. Magic that supposedly no longer existed.

Except it clearly did.

“Then you need to come with me,” he said, trying to reassert control of the situation. “Down to the station. We can talk there.”

“No.” Simple, final. Not defiant, just certain.

“That wasn’t a request.”

“I know what it was, Detective Amali.”

There was his name again, and this time she let it linger, watching his reaction. “But if I go with you, we both know I’ll never make it to the station. And then you’ll never find out who’s really killing these people.”

“Is that a threat?”

“It’s a warning.” She finally moved, pushing off the wall and strolling along the perimeter of the room. Not toward him, not away, but just circling, like she was showing him something.

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