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The missing piece the other half

"I really liked this book the story is amazing and I really want to request the author for the new updates "

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Words are mixed up.

"I find a lot of grammar mistakes throughout the book. I can tell it is directly from the translator. It would be very helpful to have a person with the language that it's being translated into to also proof read for these errors. "

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Missing Piece.. The Other Half

"I really love the story so far. The plot is interesting and looking forward to reading what happens further.. "

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Love it..

"I like all the plot of this novel..."

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A Missing Piece.. The Other Half

"I love the story line ...!!! You have a way of bringing the characters emotions on concise way that it allows the reader to feel what the characters are going thru without being redundant. I hope you update the rest of the story and please write stories for each of the brothers and the father as well. Highly recommend this story"

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The missing piece, the other half

"The plot is good but my anger issues cannot tolerate finishing it. I don't like their father, i am too African to tolerate him and his stupid ways of handling his sons stupidity "

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