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After Sundown

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Summary

Two groups of friends. One is alive Other is not

Status
Complete
Chapters
5
Rating
n/a
Age Rating
18+

Chapter 1

The flames danced too close to the sky.

Shanon squinted through the smoke and heat, her breath ragged as she stumbled over tree roots and charred debris. The fire roared behind her, devouring everything in its path. She could hear Hunt shouting her name, but his voice was drowned out by the crackle of burning wood and the wind’s frantic howling.

They had been laughing only hours earlier—laughing and toasting marshmallows under the stars. Now, the stars were gone, swallowed by black smoke.

“Shanon!”

She turned and saw him—Hunt’s face streaked with soot, his eyes wide with fear. He held out his hand, but before she could reach for it, a tree collapsed between them, sending a wave of heat that knocked her to the ground.

Her last thought before the world went dark was that they had promised to stick together.


Shanon opened her eyes to a soft light filtering through the canopy. The forest was calm, the air crisp and cool. She lay on a patch of moss, her fingers digging into the earth as if testing whether it was real.

“Shanon! Hey, you okay?”

Hunt’s voice startled her. He knelt beside her, brushing leaves from her hair. The fear she remembered in his eyes was gone, replaced by something gentler—relief.

“What happened?” she croaked, sitting up.

“You passed out or something.” Cooper appeared behind Hunt, hands shoved in his pockets. “We couldn’t find you for hours.”

“Hours?” Shanon repeated. Her head ached as she tried to recall the fire. She glanced around. The trees were untouched, their leaves vibrant green. The ground was free of ash. No smoke. No heat.

But the unease lingered.

“Where are Gary and Max?” she asked.

“Back at the camp,” Hunt said. “We’ve been waiting for you to wake up before heading back.”

They moved carefully through the underbrush, though Shanon couldn’t explain the knot of dread in her stomach. Something felt wrong. When they reached their campsite, the fire pit was cold. Half-burned logs surrounded it, like the scene had been abandoned in the middle of the night.

“Weird,” Max muttered, kicking at the ashes. “It’s like we never lit it.”

Shanon didn’t reply. She noticed something else—no food wrappers, no bags, no leftover supplies. The clearing was too clean, too perfect, like someone had erased the signs of their existence.


Days passed—or at least, they felt like days. The sun rose and set, but the group didn’t feel hunger. They didn’t feel tired, either. At first, no one commented on it. They chalked it up to stress, the way fear twists reality and makes you forget to eat.

But then the whispers began.

Late at night, Shanon heard faint murmurs in the trees. Sometimes it sounded like laughter, sometimes like crying. She wasn’t the only one.

“I saw something,” Gary confessed one evening. “Over there.” He pointed toward the edge of the clearing. “Looked like…me.”

“No way,” Max said, but his voice lacked conviction.

They started seeing shapes in the trees—figures that looked like them but disappeared the moment they got close. The strangest part was the familiarity. It wasn’t fear they felt when they saw the figures; it was recognition.

“We’re losing it,” Cooper snapped. “We’ve been out here too long. We need to find a way back.”

But no matter how far they walked, they always ended up back at the clearing.

Shanon spotted the flicker of light first—a distant glow that could only mean one thing.

“Another campfire,” she whispered.

The others followed her gaze. Through the trees, they saw the silhouettes of strangers huddled around a fire. Their laughter drifted through the forest, easy and carefree.

“People,” Hunt said, almost reverently. “Maybe they can help.”

They approached cautiously, but something felt wrong. The strangers didn’t seem to notice them—no startled gasps, no turning heads. Shanon reached out toward one of them, a girl with long braids, but her hand passed through her shoulder as if touching mist.

She stumbled back.

“They can’t see us,” she whispered.

Panic spread through the group. They shouted, waved their arms, but the campers remained oblivious.

“Did you see that?” he whispered to the others. “Someone’s here.”


The forest felt different that night—alive in a way it hadn’t been in years.

Shanon was the first to see the flicker of light, barely visible through the dense canopy. “Is that… a fire?” she whispered, her voice barely more than a breath.

The others turned in unison. Through the tangled branches, the warm glow pulsed like a heartbeat, distant but unmistakable.

“It can’t be,” Cooper said. “No one comes here.”

“Someone did,” Hunt muttered, already moving toward the light.

The others followed, driven by a mix of curiosity and dread. As they drew closer, voices drifted through the trees—laughter and idle chatter. Shanon froze, her heart pounding. She hadn’t heard voices like this in years.

Real voices.

They crouched behind the underbrush at the edge of the clearing. Five strangers sat around a fire, their faces lit by the flames. One of the girls, blonde and animated, waved her hands as she spoke. The others leaned in, their laughter cutting through the stillness.

“There’s no way it’s true,” the blonde girl said.

“It’s true,” another girl with dark hair replied. “My cousin’s friend knew one of the firefighters who came here.”

Shanon felt a jolt of recognition, though she couldn’t explain why.

“What are they talking about?” Max whispered.

“Shhh,” Shanon hissed.

The blonde girl leaned closer to the fire. “He said the fire was so bad, they didn’t find any bodies. Just ashes and melted tents.”

Shanon’s breath caught.

The boy sitting beside her—tall, scruffy, and nervous—shifted uneasily. “I heard they weren’t really gone, though.”

“What do you mean?” the dark-haired girl asked.

“They say the ghosts stayed.”

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