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Unexpected but good

"Twist of the story but really good so far "

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Confusing plotline

"46 chapters in and this story makes less sense then it did 30 chapters ago. Nothing sticks around, everything resets after a chapter or 2. People are on Marsai's side and then they aren't. The triplets love her and then they don't. The rest of the pack might as well not exist for all the attention they get. This may make sense eventually but I fear it will take 200 chapters to get there. "

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