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"Excellent story! Took me a while to realize Malik was black. You did a very good job showing how, even today, a mixed color relationship runs into discrimination. But you also made guilt, love and grief universal emotions. Like always, excellent writing. I always enjoy your work. "

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Soooooooooooo good

"Soooooo good "

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