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POCKET OF DESIRE: THE STRICKER'S CLAIM

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Summary

"POCKET OF DESIRE: THE STRICKER'S CLAIM" explores the intricate dance between obsession, connection and possession through the lens of a carrom game, highlighting the emotional stakes, complexities, and emotional dynamics of love and competition. The tension between winning, connection, intimacy and passion creates a captivating narrative; resonating deeply.

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Complete
Chapters
1
Rating
5.0 (2 reviews)
Age Rating
16+

POCKET OF DESIRE: THE STRICKER'S CLAIM


Duel; take aim, break; ricochet.

Was a shot wasted? No, in vain.

A smile on his face with obsession in his eyes,

Possession in his veins, hatred lied in sight?

With the striker’s gentle kiss, a carrom clash commenced,

Only for the queen! Carrom men tensed.

Was winning the aim or pocketing the queen?

The one with the queen meant a win indeed.

Foul, he growled; to the opponent – scowled.

“You’re mine, I own you,” he looked at me and avowed.

His hand on his chin, prowling the board,

His grin widened, “One shot away, darling; you belong to me.”

Only pocketing was left, I was owned,

Lost the identity — a queen love sold.

Lick shot in a flick, victory screaming within him,

“Told you, I own you, don’t be mean, my love. Again?”

A decision was made, scores showed update.

Between the pockets and blocks, my destiny carved this date!

Hunger deceived or power consumed,

Or was I fluctuating between the two?



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