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Trapped by the alpha

"Very interesting story line "

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Great writing ✍️

"The author is a great storyteller. I was captivated from the beginning to the end. I felt Athena’s side of story ended abruptly and delved into Damon’s past instead. I would have liked to seen their lives together 5, 10 years into the future 🥰. Please bring back Athena and Damon, perhaps in a bonus chapter!!!"

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Compelling Book!

"I really, really enjoyed your book! I can totally see a book too with the same characters. Hopefully you’ll let that swirl around in your mind while you’re thinking of all the other books she would love to write to! Great job."

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This is great

"I like how stuck I am when it comes to this book. I can’t wait to see what happens next. I love that it’s not predictable like other stories and that there aren’t a crap ton of grammar errors. I would recommend this book to anyone who likes a romance or mystery book that keeps you engaged."

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Trapped By The Alpha

"Loved this story "

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Great Story!

"Love the story"

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Awesome

"Absolutely perfect. Great love story. If you love the paranormal you’ll love this. Should be published!!!!! Great job author"

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Nothing

"I honestly thought it could have been a bit more detailed and the mother could have had a bigger role in the grand scheme of things"

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Trapped By The Alpha

"It ended not knowing what happened to the Luna. It needs another book to a better ending."

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Capturing

"I've been spellbound by this book. It has captured my eyes to not put it down. I love the plots, how the characters have developed, and just wow. Thank you "

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Review

"I like very much this story.I love the love story between Athena and Damon.It s very interesting the story behind Damon and his family"

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Trapped by the Alpha

"The plot is like a lot of others and at first I didn’t really care for the characters. Then I started to like them Now I want to know how they fare. The back story of the mom and the alpha I like Anna and want her to have a voice"

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Love the rebellion agains machismos

"Like it. a great twist to the werewolf lore norms"

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Pretty dang good, I like the author

"New to me author. Very good story. Not all sunshine and roses but a bit of grit and uncertainty. Wow."

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Intriguing

"I love your story so much. The way you write is captivating and I'm so invested into the story. Please don't get discouraged to write, you're an amazing writer and the story has so much potential. Keep it up."

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Intense !!!

" I dislike the fact that the Author made the present luna weak...... but overall not a bad book even though some parts of the book is a bit boring."

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Good, but confusing

"I think this story has lots of potential. Love the premise; I see the intent and think it's great! There are just a lot of inconsistencies that start unraveling the story towards the middle. By the end it feels like some drafts were pushed together leading in different directions. They were written well and each idea was intriguing, but the ideas did not work together for one cohesive plot. Keep going! 💚"

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Trapped by the alpha

"This was a very interesting story and I enjoyed reading it."

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Great story, enjoyable read!

"Great story, enjoyable read!"

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So confusing

"It started out with so much potential. Then towards the end it was like it went backwards in time with no clue how far. What happened to Athena? The mother? Anna? Was disappointed there were so unanswered questions. "

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