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Story is great

"I honestly liked the whole thing "

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Looking forward to more

"This is awesome! I can't wait for more!"

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So far, so fun!

"I love the playful yet sensual nature of their relationship so far. "

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Fox trot

"Erotic Short Story. I’m waiting for the next story of Fox Trot"

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