The Stone

"a very good story, brought tears to my eyes. I would love to see more. You could put intrigue into it...was Harry poisoned/cursed? Why did he waste away so young? You could bring in time travel to stop the poisoning/cursing. It could be Ginny going back or Lily, or one of the boys. It could be that being hit with two killing curses made his illness be lethal. Could they go back and find another way to get the soul leach/horcrux out of Harry before he walked to his death in that forest? I truly think that you have a wonderful talent in writing. This "one-shot" is an example of it. I think you could turn this into a very good multi-chapter novelette! *crossing fingers*"