What is your opinion?
I'm so glad I have outline errors .
"I will rewrite it in advance and make it understandable and readable using for my readers... I'm sorry for the error that happened on the novel, but I'm busy with it "
Betrayal and vengeance by Themba T Twala lll
"This book is not worth reading! I doubt this is the author's work because which author wouldn't know that their main character had been killed twice? In one chapter she was pushed to her death and in the chapter immediately after she was alive and getting married. Then she was poisoned and died a second time. Lol. Secondly, one of the main characters started life as a male in chapt 1 and 2 and then became a female from chapt 3 onwards. Thirdly, the chapters seem to be a summary rather than actual chapters of a book. You'll be lucky to have quotes in the chapter. All l can say is don't waste your time."
