What is your opinion?
Emotional
"Mr Tobias your writing always grabs my attention, no matter how long or short it is. An emotive tale. Thank you"
Submerged into this
"The way you wrote this had my chest tightening as a fear I have surfaced and pulled me in. The writing is well done and feels polished without being forced. Mr. Tobias has a way of grabbing you by whatever he wants and pulling into the story to experience what the character is going through. He is less of an explicit or violent writer and more psychological in how he details the events. You got my mark of approval. Well done yet again. Thank you for sharing your mind with us. I look forward to more."
sinking feeling.
"at first it starts slow but then the terror jumps out at you from out of the blue! it stopped my heart! great short. thank you for sharing."
Short and captivationg
"What an interesting story idea! Tobias knows how to capture your attention and hold it. It is a quick read, but it will stay with you. Good job, really well written."
Totally amazing!
"Wow! I wasn’t expecting such a plot twist. This is a great, suspenseful short story that had me on the “edge of my seat” if I can use the phrase and with the same anticipation that comes from swimming and and being placed in a real-life catch-22 situation. Nice job! "
Vividly
"You carry a lot within you. You do a great job of capturing emotions. I’m curious to see what else you will write. Best regards."
Emotional and Well Written
"I really enjoyed this story. It was emotional and sad. The writing made the scene feel very real and intense, and overall it was a really well written story."
One chapter.
"With one chapter the author managed to make me feel something. Truly i am impressed. This is the type of writing i struggle to see nowadays. Authors often think that emotional scenes need long descriptions. But the truth is. The less we know the more tragic it becomes. I feel like this single chapter captured everything a good scene needs to have. And it stands really strong even alone. <3"
