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The Pit Of Emptiness | Poems by M.Rabstone

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Summary

⚠️PLEASE READ BEFORE READING THIS BOOK⚠️ (Englisch is not my first language) Hey guys✨️✨️ So, I'm a depressed little something and write poems. I have so much of them that I thought I could make a book out of it. Maybe a few of you find peace in reading them or help you. Still, these poems are about suicide, self hate, self-harm, emptiness, and many other triggering things that have to do with mental illnesses. I write about these things because they affect myself and help me. If you can't read such things, then please don't read it. To the others who are going to read it, have fun, don't do any stupid things, and remember: SUICIDE IS NOT A GOOD WAY TO CHOOSE!!! I often think about it myself, and you can also read it in my poems. SO PLEASE DON'T READ IT IF IT COULD AFFECT YOU!!! Thank you. (Before I forget it, don't steal any poem, and if you want to use any quotes, ask first, pls. I wrote everything by myself. No, I didn't use ai) Not every poem I write is possible to read on Wattpad, btw. So if you're interested in reading more: My insta: miss_rabstone My TikTok: miss_rabstone

Status
Ongoing
Chapters
3
Rating
n/a
Age Rating
18+

A lonely City || 🥀

It was a quiet night
Everybody slept in peace
It was a quiet night
The big fight caused to shatter a heart in more than one piece

The moon shined bright
The stars watched the scene
The wind tried to spend comfort
Suddenly tried to be everything but mean

They were there
Watching it from above
It rained after
Tried to give her sympathy and love

But they were too late
It was way too quiet when she left
Drowned herself in the ocean
The water being her grave

It was too quiet the next day
The sun not shining bright
Sad to not get to see her normally so cheerful face again

The birds didn't sing their songs
The stars didn't shine
The moon protected her grave
The water reflected her image one more time

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