It's good

"It is a good story and with that a good start as a new writer myself I can't really give you tips on how to write it or anything like that so I am only going to say what went wrong,what I felt didn't fit well.So basically I just wanted you to start giving more info on the group of friends and how the band even began and on the main characters background.Also I know how it is to have grammar mistakes trust me in my stories I got a lot of them so this I am saying so you can double check your story cause I found some misspelling which were clear accidents anyway OVERALL I think you started great I love it I just had like a little click in my head about the beginning how you started it cause I was a bit confused at some parts like where the main lead started reminiscing when the band started "