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Scintillating

"Beautiful write up"

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Gagged

"It was so good, but I was shocked by the ending, like genuinely shooketh. Definite must read."

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Ooft! What a read!

"Honestly a well written and thought out concept! I enjoyed the read and even though the ending could be considered controversial, it blew my mind! Happy ending? Maybe….."

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I enjoyed this

"I felt the beginning was a bit off but the story grew into a bigger plot…not just the thought of having a baby but starting a future "

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Expert level reached!

"Wow author! Perfect. It’s a shame it was only 4 chapters. You are truely talented and could definitely be published."

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Review

"Darker than I expected but still a compelling story. I like the strong female characters and the solidarity between them "

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Interesting

"Your story is very interesting. I'm looking forward to more. The only thing I think it's missing is more spice to the breeding scenes. The potential is high when working with different species. Looking forward to more! "

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Feels unfinished

"It's good, but the ending is super abrupt. It feels unfinished. "

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