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What is your opinion?
Forever under my care
"Started off reasonably needed more information, the characters were not explain who they were of what links they had to each other then all of a sudden a daughter was thrown in the mix the last chapter seems to have been thrown together so as to finish the oik and there were so many lose ends that it made enjoyment if the book non-existent."
Nice draft
"In my opinion it is a draft of a good story. Chaotic but when the author fills the gaps it will be enjoyable to read it."
