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Silent moon

"Good story characters are interesting love the quirky quality and the style of writing is very interesting can't wait for the outcome "

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Appreciation and Commission Request

"Hi! I’m Eloise, a digital artist passionate about visual storytelling. I just read your story and was completely pulled in the emotion, the world, the characters it all played out in my head like a comic. I’d love to collaborate on adapting a scene into a short comic! I focus on expressive characters and impactful layouts, and I think we could create something really special together. I charge reasonably and am happy to share samples of my work if you're curious. No pressure just wanted to say how much I loved your writing and share the idea. Feel free to reach out on Discord: luansousa8287. "

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Silent moon

"Some parts of the chapters are repeated. That is a little disappointing. But over all I like the book and I would send it to friends"

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Silent moon

"Love the plot & look forward to the rest of the book. Note in the last 2 chapters the writing was doubled - repeated itself."

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Good story

"Intrigued by the storyline so far!"

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Addicted already

"I'm loving the story plot so far. I can't wait to continue the story. Towards the end the paragraphs were repeating and on chapter seemed out of order. Still interesting and I want to continue the story"

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