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FANTASTIC

"Omg, I’m crying from JOY right now. This story was short yet utterly beautiful in every aspect it presented. The writing style, characters, the plot, the world-building. I am sure going to be reading his other novels. I encourage you to do the same."

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clanless

"An absolutely amazing story. I hit every emotion in the book. The characters were full and realistic, I could feel the fear and love of both young men as they grew closer. Two pained souls becoming one in the end. I found one written mistake, the use of a wrong name, and the father's whereabouts in the climax. This is a must read for all. I loved it from beginning to end. Thank you for sharing Jared."

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A Short, Perfect Romance

"I can't get enough of the way the characters are written: so well-written and fleshed-out even with the shorter word count. I loved every single chapter. My emotions were all over the place, which goes to show how easy it is to get hooked. Such a pure love, and so beautifully described. I'm not sure I could ever articulate just how much I enjoy Jared's writing. If anyone sees this review: Just fucking read the book. Trust me."

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