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Splendido

"l'ho divorato. anche senza denti. bellissimo. e sono stata fortunata perché è stato il primo romanzo che ho letto su questa piattaforma. Nella traduzione in italiano perde qualcosa in scrittura. ma la trama, come l'hai sviluppata, la comprensione del sistema che hai inventato sono meravigliosi grazie per questa avventura"

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Nighttime

"Fantastic book. Great story line. I really enjoyed it"

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Good book

"I’m enjoying reading the book the plot lines and the flaw is easy to read and hard to put down "

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book review

"good plot entirely. "

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Ice Cold Alpha

"The title and picture had me a bit fooled as hockey was not a huge part of the ongoing story. It is definitely a feel good one and it was quick and easy to read with its flow."

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Amazing and you can't put it down

"This is a 100% recommendation to all romance and protector lovers!!"

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Totally awesome

"This is an amazing story with greatly character development and dialogue!🤯🤗 I would highly recommend reading this. I can’t wait for the next chapter 😛"

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soooo good

"been reading stories like this for a long time now, and this got me hooked on the first chapter "

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Well thought out vengeance tale

"This was superb. Well crafted story, thought out main and secondary characters, and a plot that moved well. The FL and ML meet early on, realize they are second chance mates, although the FL takes a bit to recognize this due to her fated mate rejecting her, after sleeping with her first. The ML realizes she was wronged and works with zeal to bring vengeance to her first mate. It doesn't drag in any way, it moves from one instance to the other pretty well. The FL gets a protector in the ML's pack which proves useful when the father of her first mate shows up to try to attack her again. From what happens to both of them? I doubt the actions they made prior to the end were worth the punishment they take before death claims them. If you like a good vengeance tale that truly delivers? then try this one. "

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Virgie's Take

"Raven suffered so much that I don't see an end to her self torment. It's all that she knows. All of these first chapters are unbearably sad."

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Ice cold alpha

"A wonderful book, wish it would have dealt with her father and her old pack. "

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Nice story

"It’s not a very complicated story but nicely written, respectful towards the characters and easy to enjoy."

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It's beautiful. I love that he just want to set fire to the world for his mate.

"It's good. I dislike the raven pack. But the love, affection, concern to her from thomas is amazing I think she will just burst into cry if she is not strong enough. But the author pictures her is awesome."

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Ice Cold Alpha

"I really enjoyed this book, to have an Alpha that is only out to protect the FL is rare. I will be looking for more from this author."

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Love the storyline!!

"I really enjoyed this story! The characters are well developed, and the plot kept me engaged from beginning."

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Ice cold alpha

"Enjoyed this book. Curious to know if you have a sequel book profiling on her dad and stepmom "

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Ice cold alpha

"Enjoyed this book. Curious to know if you have a sequel book profiling on her dad and stepmom "

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Ice cold alpha

"Great story, although the end is a bit brutal. It's well written, and had me in tears quite a few times."

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Beautiful Story, But Leaves You Wanting More

"love the story, but there is so much left unanswered. the confrontation with her father and the luna, what thomas says to her old pack. it would have been nice to show a little relationship between kiassian and raven. i would have loved for interaction of him and her in their new life, and her training period. than their future with future alpha baby boy or girl. but overall, it was a very nice story, for someone who has stopped reading,and wants to start again, they can start with this. "

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Ice Cold Alpha

"I liked this a lot,after getting to the end it still feels like it’s not done yet. Still missing piece like her father and the Luna what happens with them and what happens with pack now. Thank you for writing this story, I liked it a lot. "

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