Inkitt
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What is your opinion?

Pls update

"Pls update !!!"

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On point 👌

"Good 👍 story author well done, update plz Author, I'm Soo interesting huh."

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Billionaire surrogate

"Good story telling"

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Good read

"I’m enjoying the book. I like the way it shows Olivia’s strength of character and how she inspires others to stand up for themselves. The characters are well grounded, the storyline is interesting and keeps developing. Can’t wait to see what happens next ..."

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Good book

"Enjoying it"

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Chapters

"More chapters please!"

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Hi Virgin Surrogate

"I really enjoyed this storyline. I just want to finish the rest of the story. I want christian to find out about his brother and old girlfriend."

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His surrogate

"The book is fun reading i didnt like that the whole story is written in past tense and sometimes the exaggerated talks and details of side characters bore me that it. Overall im enjoying the novel"

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Updates?

"Love the story, but its been months since an update. Unless I'm doing something wrong? "

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Magia

"Liked everything "

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Oh lu heats full

"Il so in love "

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His Virgiv surrogate

"I love the plot and the storyline it is keeps you wanting more. I can’t wait for the rest of the story."

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Good

"Story is great to be fair "

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Virgin surrogate

"A good and enjoyable book to read the only thing is that they skip a day or a week when you finish reading a chapter and start on something else "

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Magic that happened

"Ohh I really don't know how to express it. I started this story casually just to fresh my mind due to exam pressure and know I can't stop reading this . I fucking love this."

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His Virgin Surrogate

"Love the story!"

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Pink moon

"I am loving this story, I really appreciate the gift you have at storytelling. Plus the hot parts are a bonus "

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Like like like like like like like like like like like like

"I love the spicy. I recommend to anyone who is interested in spicy and I don’t recommend to anyone under 18"

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What was good

"I like how this girl changes from being mean to being nice and the man he seeing good stuff about the girl and started to change from being a hard person to being sweet and caring well the man and girl have not gotten married so I agates to get to that part "

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His Virgin surrogate

"So this story just got really good! Looking forward to reading more chapters. Like all the characters and how you weave them together into the story and the plot without losing the identity of the main characters. Like it a lot. "

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