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"Not something I would normally read but I really enjoyed reading this"

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Great story

"I normally don't read books that are not dark romance but this one is great and I love the characters,can't wait for more updates 💓"

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Great story

"I truly believe this story has great potential. I love how tension is built with effective cliffhangers and twists—the plot is very compelling. I’m really enjoying the read and look forward to what’s next! A great Part 1. I also think this would be a strong addition to the competitions "Shadows and Secrets" and "Ivy and Secrets.""

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Top marks

"I love the character I normally only read fanfics but you asked me to read this, so I figured I’d try it out and thanks so much"

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Awesome

"I'm am more of a horror book fan but I have to say I'm very interested on what's going to happen next. Awesome write "

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Top Marks

"First of all I greatly appreciate writer efforts, on how he brings his imagination to reality with breathtaking characters and plot. Characterisation in any story matters a lot and he made his characters so engaging. And lastly I appreciate, how well he's dealing with complex characters.... Salut to you author 🫡💙💙"

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good

"I like the story so far. Very good. "

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Daily Life Story turned into High Stake

"A delicate story with neatly written various point of views. Using rich vocabularies but some words are unfamiliar to me, so I need to search for their meaning. Some characters act questionably as if for the plot sake. Started as common daily life story then sudden mysteries with high stake appeared."

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Great Book

"I love the writing style in this book. The author does a really great job with bringing the story to life. The characters were dynamic and have their own unique personalities. The author also does a good job at bringing out different emotions in the reader. I would recommend this book to everyone and I look forward to reading more from this author."

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Interesting and fun

"The Characters are well put together and has a thoughtful review of them all. Owen and Ravi are the cutest kids running around like Batman and Robin, lol I normally don't read novels that are of childhood nostalgia, but this novel pulls you into the characters with their personalities and intentions. I can't wait for the adventures to begin! ^_^"

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Delightful and delicious

"It is rare to find a story that prides itself on the simplicity of its narration and the lucidity of its prose. It is even rarer to find a story that has a shift in POV in almost every chapter. These are what makes TOP MARKS unique. Multiple POVs, relatable characters, convincing dialogs, and no fluff. Yes, there is no fluff! No grandiose prose, no over-depicted scenery, no complex and compound sentences. Just plain and simple storytelling using emotions and events to carry it forward. Most people confuse writing with storytelling. These two are not the same. Storytelling does not need conventional writing tools, or props, or tropes. It only needs a smooth and easy flowing narration style. Tobias, the author, knows how to tell a story. TOP MARKS has that in plenty. It is neither an eight-course meal, nor is it a quick snack. It is a delightful melt-in-the-mouth dessert that you savor at the end of a meal. It is what you want to have before you go to bed. This is a story you would want to read before you go to bed."

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Top Marks

"Absolutely love where the story is headed. The writing style is very captivating. It is fast paced with a good measure of action and dialogue. And the dialogue is very natural, as normal people would speak. I look forward to reading the rest of the book. The book is aptly titled "Top Marks!". Well done."

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Work a project

"The way he is writing this, with each chapter in a different POV while the story continues to proceed is extremely well done. While some details seem over the top, they seem to be more realistic and fit in with what he has made. I'm chomping at the bit for whatever comes next. Keep up your quality and progress. You got my support for what it's worth."

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Top Mark's Review

"I'd like to start by commending the author on their engaging writing style and skillful handling of multiple perspectives. The story is well-balanced and enjoyable to read. I particularly appreciated the humor and suspense that kept me invested. If you're looking for a lighthearted teen drama, I'd definitely recommend this book. However, I gave it four stars because it didn't quite resonate with me personally. I felt that the story could benefit from more depth and complexity, perhaps due to my familiarity with different writing styles. Nonetheless, the author has done a great job, and I wish them all the best. "

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A nice read

"I liked the cliff hangers and plot twist. The distinctive difference between each character’s POV Even though I enjoyed the suspense, there were too many scenes where the shock was too much for me to handle. I would prefer a slow way of unraveling the events that each character goes through. In all it’s deserving of all the praise it got. A good writing and and interesting story with a unique still of writing that keeps you hooked "

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New experience

"this story was remarkable, I'm not really a fan on reading books like this so I can't tell if it was okay but I did enjoy it so much I can't wait for the next chapters"

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Suspensful and intriguing

"Its a suspensful story with a well written mc. Good going writer! 👏 "

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Dramatic but enthusiastic

"The story in general is good, the plot is good, and the writing style is simple but effective. The story is dramatic but a little enthusiastic. But overall, it is nice. And I liked it. I wrote a very short review, but I like to keep it short, but the story in general is good. For the first time, frankly, I like a somewhat dramatic story.😅🤗"

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Top Marks

"Really amazing.Everyone should read this story because of its strong overall plot."

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Full of potential, very original

"The story is written from multiple POVs creating a unique look at the multitude of characters. The part about voting to change the story is really nice and original too. The storytelling is dynamic, and it has so much potential, however I would advise refraining from certain uneccessary sentences, or using the name of the main character so oftenm when a simple "He" would suffise from the context. But your writing shows so much promise, keep it up!"

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