Inkitt
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Unusual!

"I like the plot, coz its quite unusual, and I feel kinda sympathy to Alessandro, dunno why. I wish the series would go brighter! I strongly require to continue writing the rest of the story,💪"

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To be continued...

"Interesting and exciting story. Attention to detail, character descriptions are good. The scientific part makes you think, maybe it would be nice to change the color of your eyes... I'll wait for the continuation of the story. Thanks to the author and creative success."

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An excellent read.

"I enjoyed reading this opening chapter, five stars all round, instantly hooked, making you feel you are there watching the characters, and the storyline is very unique, I recommend you follow this author and give her stories a read. I can’t wait to read more. "

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