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Good book

"So far this is a really good book I can not wait to read more. The characters are really unique "

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Extraterrestremente bella

"Me encantó! Novela corta, que va directo al punto y buen desarrollo de personajes"

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Great potential for a whole series

"This story has great potential to continue as a full series. I love the building up process and I'm eager to see if there's anymore. I'll be reading Tiffany's story next! It does need some proofreading to help further along the grammar aspects. Most of it seems like partial words and it got autocorrected to a different word Otherwise a good jumpstart! ❤️"

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Loving it 😍 .

" No dislikes. Book 2 is just as good as book 1. Job well done."

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Barbarians!

"This is a fabulous story with well rounded characters and a great ot line, well worth reading, but it is riddled with grammatical errors, spelling mistakes and typos. With a bit of polishing though it could be even better. Keep up the good work, author, and maybe read through each chapter after writing and before posting - I know how easy it is to not notice the little mistakes while rushing to get the words from the imagination onto the page, and a quick read through can reveal the brain farts that ended up o the page! 9.5 out of 10 😁 "

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Great sci fi romance

"Wonderful read, short and good detail Plot was simple and easy to read character development was clean and clear. Enjoyable read. Read it quickly and wanted more."

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Amazing

"I like to read alien stories and I can definitely say that this is a wonderful one. I just wish it was a bit more long"

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Interesting world

"Loving it, sweet dynamic between lead characters "

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Obsession!

"You know a story is good when you can't stop re-reading it! Just gorgeous writing. The author has found the perfect balance of detail to build the world, without it dominating the plot - I feel like I'm there. I'm also in love already, looking forward to more! "

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Nice

"What a nice plot and and story line. Looking forward to reading more of your books."

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Good read so far

"Enjoying story, very intriguing, imaginative and even has some humorous places. Amazing read so far"

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Aliens

"Wonderful story line it gives a great picture yet the language part is off putting "

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Fated to the barbarian

"It seems like it's not finished, like a part 1."

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???

"I don't know what to think of this book, it is similar to the Barbarian Alien by Ruby Dixon. Good read though "

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There are too many similarities

"Overall, this is well written. There are a few grammar issues, but nothing that makes it unreadable. However, even though the plot is fun, it is too similar to a series written by Ruby Dixon."

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