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Complex and Beautiful!

"The book kept my attention more than most with its complexity, loving dynamic between the leads, and mind-bending plot twists. While on the surface it's a love story and betrayal, as you peel back the pages, elements of insecurity, obsession, petty jealousy, and class divide become apparent. The story was long, but didn't linger on in one area for too long before something interesting or dramatic happened. I highly recommend it for someone who enjoys complex love stories!"

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WHY? BOOK 1

"Love ❤️ love ❤️ love ❤️ this story though it was heartbreaking 💔 learning of Bella's backstory. Hearing how she was treated as a child at home and school 🏫 . And then to have to endure bullying again at her hockey rink job. Wanna finish the story to see if she has her "happily ever aftermath Alex! KEEP ON WRITING ✍️! YOU'RE AMAZING!!! 🌺🤙🌺"

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"Why didn’t I read this biok earlier:) Finally a book I almost can’t stop reading. Well done!"

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Mind-blowing!!

" I always love a great story that keeps me on pins and needles. Nights could not come fast enough for me to get back to this emotional roller coaster I was on while enjoying this story. Bella and Alex. Wow!! I can’t wait for ur next story to come out. What a great book!!!🥰"

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Great story

"Loved all of it! "

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Read it one go, it's so good

"I was hooked on this story from the first chapter. I love the character dynamics and how the story runs. Loved reading it. You write really well, Author! Keep it up ((:"

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Great Read

"It's a great read, never read anything from the author before but this is very good. Intriguing writing style and great characters😘"

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Why

"I wis it continued so that we could find out who her father is and how Alex takes the news."

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WHY?

"I could not stop reading! Great story and strong characters. I'm actually sad I finished it!"

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Beautiful

"This story is the perfect length. The characters are well shaped yet fluid. The balance between emotions was equally impactful. "

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What a great story

"I really enjoyed the author's writing. It had me on edge. "

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"This was a really good romance novel. I enjoyed reading it. I loved the mind linking between the two main characters. It added another layer of depth to the novel. A pleasant twist.I "

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Can't remember title

"It's the story with the hockey player and girl whose boyfriend cheated on her 20th birthday. Going okso far."

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Ard

"Great story development "

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Enjoyed this very much

"very enjoyable well done author really worth the read."

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WHY?

"I really liked this book. It was light to read but touched heavy themes at the same time (abuse and bullying). It had a nice plot and the characters had a nice development (especially Alex). It's worth reading."

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"Different but so good. Can't wait to read more from you. "

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WHY?

"This book is amazing! Filled with so much emotion, the characters are beautifully developed. What steals the show is the plot. I would recommend this book to anyone who reads fo escape the emotions of their own to occasionally feel those of others. "

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Answers always start with a question

"Very interesting story. Lots of heartache, drama, all the things that make for a good story. There are some typos. Nothing to stop the flow of the story. It is a story of what we as humans are supposed to be for one another. Self sacrificing loving and giving of ourselves “do unto others as we would have them do unto us” Bella’s character lived that life. This story also had characters that showed the opposite of care through greed and depraviltiy, such is the world we live in. The title is perfect. “WHY”. I guess at the end of each of our reflections we can ask ourselves ,why. Why are our actions in life what they are, why do they reflect our motives and more importantly do they give life or take it. I loved how this story ended. It allows us the option to explore our own ending. Always hoping for a happy life. "

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Why?

"Why? is it a masterpiece? The intriguing plot, well-rounded characters, and perfect balance of romance and drama hook readers. The pacing is excellent, and your unique writing style makes the story come alive like a movie. Bella’s resilience and Alex’s complexity make them relatable and compelling. The twists, emotional depth, and realistic obstacles keep readers invested. A small suggestion: consider revealing character backstories gradually to enhance suspense. Overall, this is a fresh, innovative romance that stands out in the genre. Keep up the fantastic work—your talent shines through every page!"

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