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"I especially loved the character dyamic between the two lovebirds, they were very different people at the start of the story, but as they grew together they seemed to pick up on each others personalities. I also LOVED the storyline, although there was a lot of intense scenes, the dramatic moment when she first gets pregnant had me very shocked. It was random, but it was so needed in a story like this. However, something i would have wanted more is for Ava's best friend diane to have had a bit more involvement in Ava's life. It seems like after the party at the start of the story, Diane just disappeared and spoke in little bits throughout the story but ultimately her character was forgotten. I would have liked to see her reaction to everything happening, and what happended to her after the party. Apart from that, the whole story is increadibly great. "

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Engaging story with characters

"Overall this is a fun read with good likeable characters. The relational dynamics are well written and great sex scenes. "

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Refreshing Story

"I loved the way you've portrayed Ava and Liam and I really appreciate that you've made it a simple and refreshing story. Refreshing because it had no fictional drama only the two protagonists and their dreamy love story. I also love that you've so fluently written about the erotic scenes which so clearly reflect the love as well as the lust, the characters feel for each other, unlike some authors who just make it about meaningless sex. Thank you for blessing us with such a lovely and refreshing story! 💘"

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amazing

"it was a good story line and an amazing book"

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Great story!

"The plot was strong and realistic. The characters were well defined and the interactions between them were very erotic. "

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Lovely reading

"Ghe ups and donws... the tears and laughs... this booknhas it all. The author does a greta job carrying the characters aroind the atory. Their temleraments, their past sotires ans what the future upholds. Great read. Loved it"

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Picking the coaches daughter

"Absolutely recommend giving this a read "

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Great great story the best !!!

"Love it can’t wait for more!! "

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Loving the dynamic

"Really enjoying this story it has two great lead characters and the dynamic between them just flows. Good background story to them too.. "

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Very good!

"I love it so far. I feel for the characters and I couldn't stop reading. "

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Wow!!! 🔥🔥🔥

"This is so very good!!!! ❤️‍🔥❤️‍🔥"

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Picking the coach’s daughter

"Great characters. Good storyline so far. Looking forward to reading the rest. I love how he stands up for his girl! No matter what!"

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