What is your opinion?
First 72
"Great short story. Well written and descriptive. I appreciate the pov being from the husband and his priority is all about protecting his wife. This could be a stand alone short story or the beginning of a longer story. Why did the alien leave him alive? What was the meaning behind their conversation?"
Awesone read!
"This was a nice quick read! It kept you on the edge of your seat. You never knew where it was going to go next. This story had my emotions all over the place. I thoroughly enjoy this author and the way he writes his stories with such detail! "