The Tenth Room

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Summary

Eight strangers wake up in a locked, featureless room with no memory of how they got there. The only clues: a large number painted on the wall—10—and a single tarot card in each of their pockets. As the group searches for answers, tensions rise and secrets emerge. The room seems designed to test them, peeling back their defenses and forcing them to confront their pasts. With every discovery, the stakes grow higher, and a sinister truth begins to unfold: not all of them will leave.

Status
Ongoing
Chapters
1
Rating
n/a
Age Rating
16+

Chapter 1: Waking up

At first, all I could sense was my breathing.

The air was cold and stale, pressing into my lungs with every inhale. Beneath me, the floor was rough and gritty—concrete. My hands brushed over small cracks as I pushed myself upright, every muscle in my body stiff and aching.

The room came into focus slowly. The walls were tall and bare, made of raw concrete, stretching high toward a flat ceiling lined with fluorescent tubes. The bluish glow of the lights flickered unevenly, their hum faint but persistent. The space was large—maybe fifty feet wide and twice as long—and entirely empty except for us.

On the far wall, a large 10 had been painted in bold black strokes. It stood stark and silent, offering no answers, only more questions.

Around me, seven other people were scattered across the floor. Some were still lying down, others sitting up, their faces pale and tense.

“What the hell is this?”

The voice came from the center of the room. A man was pacing there, his boots scuffing against the floor with every step. He was tall and broad-shouldered, with dark hair and a scowl that looked carved into his face. His fists were clenched, his whole body radiating frustration.

“You think this is funny?” he barked, pointing at a wiry man sitting nearby. “Huh? You think this is some kind of joke?”

The wiry man flinched, his glasses slipping down his nose. He tugged at the hem of his rumpled shirt, his voice trembling as he stammered, “I—I don’t know anything.”

A voice from the far wall broke the tension, dry and cutting. “Oh yeah, he’s definitely the mastermind. Because when I think of criminal genius, I think of someone who’d apologize to a vending machine for taking too long.”

I turned toward the speaker.

He was leaning casually against the wall, his lanky frame looking like it had been dropped there by accident. His hoodie hung loose on his shoulders, and his messy brown hair stuck up like he’d rolled out of bed. His smirk was faint but unmistakable, and his dark eyes gleamed with sharp amusement.

The pacing man stopped, turning his glare toward him. “You got something to say?”

The guy shrugged, still grinning. “Not much. Just that if this is your version of detective work, we’re all doomed.”

The man’s fists tightened. “Who the hell are you?”

“Ryan,” the guy said, flashing a grin. “Resident expert in getting on people’s nerves. You’ll hate me by hour two, but by hour six, you’ll wonder how you ever survived without me.”

“Do you ever shut up?”

“Not if I can help it.”

“Enough,” another voice cut in, sharp and commanding.

A woman stood near the far wall, her arms crossed over her chest. Her auburn hair caught the faint flicker of the fluorescent lights, and her piercing green eyes swept over the room like she was assessing a puzzle. Everything about her—her tone, her posture, her expression—radiated control.

“Yelling and sarcasm aren’t getting us anywhere,” she said. Her gaze moved slowly from one person to the next. “We need to get organized. First step: introductions. If we’re going to figure out what’s happening, we need to know who we’re working with.”

The wiry man with glasses cleared his throat nervously. “Uh, I’m... Simon,” he said, pushing his glasses up his nose.

The man in the charcoal suit leaned against the wall, his expression neutral. “Colin,” he said simply.

The younger woman sitting cross-legged near the far wall tugged at the zipper of her oversized jacket, her fingers twitching. “Jess,” she said quietly.

When the woman’s sharp gaze landed on me, I felt a momentary wave of hesitation. “Evelyn,” I said, my voice steadier than I expected.

The blond man who had helped me up stepped forward. “Noah,” he said.

Finally, the broad-shouldered man who had been pacing earlier crossed his arms. His voice was low and clipped when he said, “Derek.”

The last man—a figure with a shaved head who had been silent until now—spoke from where he sat against the wall. “Victor.” His deep voice was calm, almost unnervingly so.

The auburn-haired woman nodded. “I’m Claire,” she said. “Now that we know who’s here, we can start figuring out why.”

Ryan raised a hand lazily. “Quick theory: we’re all part of some twisted sociology experiment, and the real question is how long it takes for Derek to punch me. My guess is under an hour.”

“Keep talking, and it’ll be under ten minutes,” Derek shot back, his voice low and sharp.

“Shut up, both of you,” Claire snapped again, her voice like a whip.

The room fell silent. The hum of the fluorescent lights filled the air, and the painted number on the wall loomed large behind Claire.

Jess broke the silence, her voice barely above a whisper. “Does anyone remember anything before waking up here?”

Simon adjusted his glasses nervously. “I—I was at home. I went to bed, and then... nothing. Just woke up here.”

Colin straightened his tie, his voice calm but clipped. “I was at work, burning the midnight oil. Next thing I know, blacked out. And now this.”

Jess tugged at her zipper, her eyes fixed on the floor. “I just remember... panic. Like my chest was going to explode. That’s it. Just this horrible, sinking panic.”

When their attention turned to me, my throat tightened. “I... I don’t know. I was asleep, but I woke up feeling heat. And fear. Like something was burning, but I can’t... I can’t remember what.”

Ryan tilted his head, his grin flickering just slightly. “Well, my mind’s blank. Which, given the trend so far, feels like the lucky option.”

Claire exhaled slowly. “We need more information. There’s something we’re missing.”

“What? I’m just saying, no one here screams ‘international spy’ or ‘criminal mastermind.’” Ryan gestured toward Simon. “Except maybe him. But only if you count being afraid of making eye contact as a federal offense.”

Simon straightened his glasses indignantly. “I’m not afraid of eye contact.”

Ryan grinned wider. “Says the guy currently staring at the floor. Case closed.”

Derek groaned loudly. “Can we just focus?”

The silence dragged on as Claire stood with her arms crossed, her sharp green eyes moving between us. “Alright,” she said finally, her tone cutting through the tension like a blade. “Let’s figure out who we are and why we’re here. Maybe we’ll see a pattern.”

Derek scoffed, his arms still crossed over his chest. “There’s no pattern. This whole thing is a joke.”

“Then humor me,” Claire snapped. “We’ll start with the basics. Where are you from?”

There was a moment of hesitation before Simon cleared his throat. “Uh... Chicago,” he said nervously. “I work in IT. Help desk stuff, mostly.”

“Seattle,” Colin said simply. “Corporate law.”

Jess tugged at the hem of her jacket, her fingers twitching. “I’m from Denver,” she said softly. “I work in retail.”

“Noah,” the blond man offered. “New York. Paramedic.”

Derek rolled his shoulders, his expression hard. “Austin. Construction.”

Victor’s deep voice was calm and measured. “Los Angeles. I’m between jobs.”

Ryan leaned casually against the wall, his smirk faint but constant. “Boston. Freelance graphic designer. Well, when I’m not stuck in cement rooms, obviously.”

Derek turned toward him, his scowl deepening. “Can you be serious for five seconds?”

“And can you take a joke for five seconds?” Ryan shot back, grinning.

“Enough,” Claire said sharply, stepping between them. “We’re not going to solve anything by fighting.”

Evelyn shifted uncomfortably, her hands brushing against her sides—and then pausing as her fingers hit something. Slowly, she reached into her pocket and pulled out a small, stiff card. Her breath caught as she stared at it.

“What’s that?” Noah asked, noticing her hesitation.

Evelyn turned it over in her hand. The image showed a tall tower engulfed in flames, with two figures falling from its heights. Beneath it, a single word: The Tower.

Evelyn’s stomach twisted. “I... don’t know,” she murmured.

Jess’s eyes widened as she patted her jacket. She reached into her pocket and pulled out another card. “I have one too,” she said, holding it up. Her card depicted a surreal image of a dog and wolf howling at a moon. Beneath it was the word The Moon.

The room erupted as the others began checking their pockets.

“Seriously?” Ryan said, pulling out a card of his own. He glanced at it and snorted. “The Fool. Really setting me up for success here.”

Derek growled, fishing a card from his pocket. “Strength,” he muttered, glancing at the image of a figure taming a lion.

“Justice,” Claire said, holding hers up briefly.

Noah studied his card, his brows furrowed. “The Star,” he said.

Simon adjusted his glasses as he turned his card over. “The Hermit.”

Victor’s expression was unreadable as he examined his card. “The Devil,” he said flatly.

“What the hell is this?” Derek demanded, looking around the room.

“It’s a tarot deck,” Colin said calmly, as if that explained everything.

“Okay, but why do we all have one?” Jess asked, her voice trembling.

“It’s not random,” Claire said, her tone firm. “Someone put these here. They mean something.”

“Fantastic,” Ryan muttered, tossing his card in the air and catching it. “I’m sure the cards will explain everything once we decode the ancient wisdom of ‘messing with us.’”

“Enough,” Claire snapped. “These are clues. There could be more. Everyone, search the room. Check every inch of the walls, floor, and ceiling for anything that might explain this.”

With murmurs of reluctance, the group began spreading out, their hands brushing over the rough concrete surfaces. The hum of the fluorescent lights filled the silence, mingling with the soft sound of fingers on stone.

The group moved reluctantly, hands skimming the rough concrete walls, searching for anything that might explain the room. The fluorescent lights buzzed faintly, their bluish glow casting long shadows that shifted as people moved.

“Nothing over here,” Noah said, crouching near a corner. His fingers brushed the floor, inspecting cracks in the concrete.

“Same,” Simon added nervously, pulling back from the wall as though it might bite him.

“Great idea, Claire,” Derek muttered, his boots scuffing loudly against the ground. “Let’s all rub concrete. That’ll definitely get us somewhere.”

“Do you ever stop complaining?” Claire snapped, standing near the painted 10. Her gaze swept the room, cold and analytical. “Just keep looking.”

Ryan, running his hands lazily along a section of wall, grinned faintly. “What do you think we’ll find? A secret lever? A glowing door to Narnia? Because if it’s just another tarot card, I’m calling false advertising.”

“Ryan,” Claire said sharply, her tone heavy with warning.

“What? I’m looking,” he said, smirking as he tapped the wall twice with his knuckles. “Knock, knock. Anyone home?”

A softclinkechoed from beneath his feet.

The sound silenced the room. Ryan froze, glancing down, his grin fading. “Okay, that wasn’t me.”

“What was that?” Claire asked, stepping closer.

Ryan crouched, brushing dust and grit away with his fingers. His hand stopped when he found a small seam in the concrete—a barely visible outline forming a rectangular shape.

“Hey,” he said, his voice quieter now. “I think there’s something here.”

The others crowded around as Ryan traced the outline. “It’s like a panel or... a hatch?”

“Can you open it?” Evelyn asked, her voice hushed.

Noah crouched beside the hatch, running his hands along the edges. He dug his fingers into the faint gap and pulled upward. His arms strained, his face tightening with effort as the hatch groaned faintly but refused to budge.

He sat back, exhaling sharply. “It’s really stuck,” he muttered, wiping his palms on his pants.

Ryan tilted his head. “Cool. So we’ve established that it’s a strong, independent hatch that don’t need no man.”

Derek folded his arms, his gaze settling on Ryan. “Alright, your turn.”

Ryan blinked. “Wait, what?”

Derek gestured toward the hatch. “If Noah couldn’t lift it, obviously you should.”

Ryan raised an eyebrow. “Oh, of course. If the paramedic couldn’t open the heavy, sealed hatch, I’m sure my magic touch will work wonders.”

“Just do it,” Claire snapped.

With an exaggerated groan, Ryan crouched by the hatch and braced himself. “Fine, but if I dislocate something, I’m blaming all of you.” He gripped the edges and pulled. His lanky frame shook slightly as the hatch creaked faintly but held firm. After a moment, he sat back, panting. “Yep, definitely stuck. Great teamwork, everyone.”

Derek pushed past him, crouching at the edge of the hatch. “Move.”

Ryan stepped aside, raising his hands. “All yours, Captain Strength.”

Derek planted his feet and gripped the edges with both hands. His jaw tightened as he pulled sharply, the hatch groaning loudly before it scraped against the concrete and lifted. He tossed the panel aside with a sharp clatter.

“There,” Derek said, straightening.

The group stared into the dark square hole below.

“What’s in there?” Claire asked, her voice tense.

Derek knelt beside the opening, reaching inside cautiously. His hand disappeared into the shadow, and for a moment, the only sound was the faint hum of the fluorescent lights.

When Derek’s hand reappeared, he was holding a small metal box. It was roughly the size of a shoebox, smooth and featureless, with no visible seams or locks.

“What the hell is this?” Derek muttered, turning it over in his hands.

Evelyn knelt by the hatch, peering into the darkness below. The hole extended deeper than she’d expected, lined with smooth concrete that disappeared into the shadows. “It doesn’t make sense,” she murmured. “Why hide something like this down here?”

“Maybe it’s not supposed to make sense,” Colin said.

“Or maybe it’s not supposed to be opened,” Jess added nervously, stepping back.

“Then why put it here?” Claire asked, her gaze fixed on the box.

Ryan tilted his head. “I don’t know, but if it’s going to start glowing or chanting, I’d like advance notice.”

Before anyone could respond, the fluorescent lights flickered violently.

The room plunged into darkness.

Panic swept through the group. Someone cursed under their breath.

A lowclangechoed through the floor, followed by the sound of grinding metal—like gears turning somewhere deep below them.

The lights snapped back on, casting their pale glow over the group.

Evelyn’s eyes darted toward the hatch. From deep below, she thought she heard something—soft, distant, but unmistakable.

A faint clicking sound.

The air in the room felt heavier, the sound growing louder with each passing second.

The group exchanged uneasy glances, their faces pale in the fluorescent light.

Ryan exhaled slowly, his voice cutting through the tension. “Okay, I vote we shut the hatch.”