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Wow

"Words said in anger are often spoken truths. Madison is still holding the past against Liam. Liam has every right to feel hurt because Madison has been on birth control for a year and not telling her husband she wasn’t ready to add to their family just yet. Madison had her reasons but she went about it the wrong way. I think the voice of reason will be Hunter and Kendra because of a lie their relationship almost destroyed them."

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The Bully - Liam

"Liam has always been the bully and right now maybe it's time for Madison to take a step back and take care of herself. He took her virginity, her space, he lied about his marriage; it's always about him. Maybe if Madison grows up and puts herself first then she'll salvage who she's meant to be. All love isn't good. When love hurts and you have to hide within your marriage then it's time to take a much needed break. You can love someone from afar and save yourself. I know she has a daughter but if Liam will treat his wife like a possession then what and how will he treat his daughter. These are hard questions but they're also forms of abuse. Maybe Hunter needs to remind Liam who he's married to. "

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Liam lost his damn mind

"Listen I get that he hurt and she shouldn't lie. But bro fucking losing his shit. You still won't listen and hear her out. And then you did that yelling in front of your kid. I'm glad her mother didn't step in and will let them work it out "

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