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Lesson needed

"Matt needs to be taught a lesson for sure! Enough is enough. Matt trying to be controlling, Staci lying, these two and their deceit and manipulation is despicable "

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You made your bed - good or bad

"Family dinner, working in bed, being love then the CRAZY EX!!! Does Matt understand who Maxine's lawyers are, does he not understand the company that just the lawyers keep and I haven't mentioned the connection that Eli has. But now he will trust and believe that he should have walked away because vengeance is not going to be his. Hunter Deluca has been contacted and that changes all of the players and the outcome. Great chapter!!! "

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Hunter in play

"It’s about time Eli put Hunter in the game. A lesson needs to be learned and Hunter is the man to give the lesson. Eli is not going to keep it a secret and Maxine is one step closer to having her family. Hopefully, her daughter comes around maybe Hunter can do something to shake her faith in dear old dad. Let me say it again….it’s about time."

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