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Quick and easy

"Enjoyable, quick and easy to read. "

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A love he never wanted

"Excellent story can’t wait to read the rest!"

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💕💕💕

"Looking forward to reading the next book."

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Absolutely love

"I absolutely love every second reading this "

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A love he never wanted

"It's cute n I love that it's short and to the point. Can't wait to read the 2nd book."

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Loved it, can’t wait to read the rest of the series

"Brilliant story, beautiful romance and some serious dark and twisted bits too."

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Grammar

"There are some things that need to be fixed, but so far it’s good. "

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Great short read

"Easy to read style; fast moving but engaging "

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A Love He Never Wanted

"Really enjoyed reading this book. It needs a little editing, but it doesn’t seriously detract from the readability. Crazy love story… lots of fun… well written… great characters ❤️‍🔥❤️‍🔥❤️‍🔥"

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A Love He Never Wanted - The Beginning

"Although the story was short, I was very involved. It caught my interest and intensified, from the beginning. Great writing. Superb skills. Thanks and Kudos. 😘👏👏👏🌹"

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A love he never wanted-the beginning

"Absolutely loved this book, look forward to reading the next part to Aurora and Giovannis life journey."

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Love it!

"This is the perfect short story. There are spelling/grammatical/punctuation errors, but it in no way detracts from the plot. It is a fast paced story (something necessary in a twelve chapter story if you want to build a complex plot in a short span of time) and I enjoyed every minute spent reading it! Can't wait to start on the second book this evening!"

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Loving this!

"It’ takes off super which I love. Can’t wait for book two"

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A love he never wanted the beginning

"I love love love this book! John will get what’s coming to him!!! Can’t wait to read book 2! "

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Great quick read

"I thoroughly enjoyed this! There were a couple of plot holes ( it wasn’t really explained why he decided to get a job in retail. Just saying because he saw her and was intrigued didn’t really cut it for me. Additionally, not sure if the ex would’ve got off with such light charges). the spelling could be better but the story was good! Definitely worth the read"

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A Love He Never Wanted

"I love your story. I am your big fan. Your writing style is fantastic. I am so excited to read book two and book three."

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A love he never wanted-the beginning

"You really make your characters come alive when you write. Love the first part, now on to part 2 to see how everything develops."

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Good

"Good story very suspenseful but very good plots"

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A love he never wanted - the beginning

"Excellent writing and I loved the book and the characters. ❤️💯"

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Intriguing

"Character growth was highly visible. Aurora turned into one bas @$$ beyotch.Great job!! "

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