What is your opinion?
Good
"This is a pretty good novel. I do get frustrated with the grammatical mistakes however."
My Heart
"I enjoyed reading this. Decent story, but there were a few things that threw me... there are still several comments in the story from the person who assisted writing... Charlie changes from female character to male character back to a female character... the story timeline was all over the place, a little disconnected. Things seemed to happen over weeks, but then comments of things being only just a few days... character backgrounds were vague even though they were the pinnacle of the story..."
My Heart
"Though it appears to have been written by at least 2 persons, ( One of whom is sloppy, careless, and badly in need of a remedial writing class), the story is salvaged by the second personality, who is intelligent, articulate, and has a wonderful way with words. The story itself is interesting, and has kept me reading, in spite of the frustrations in trying to decipher the writers frequent trips to the 'Word salad bar'! I don't think I'll try it a second time tho, it's not worth the headache. Sorry! "
